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      write a poem that expresses your thoughts and feelings

      Write a poem. Just spill what your thinking and feeling. no judgement.

      I'll start

      The time comes

      When I look back on the world

      And say

      Was it always this dark?




      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      Today I have sat in my chair,
      with thoughts of washing my hair.
      The day is so slow,
      there's no where to go,
      I could settle for eating a pear.
      Last edited by Franklin; 02-17-2011 at 03:15 AM.
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      A party comes this Saturday
      And I am surely proud to say,
      I'm awfully excited and giddy to boot!
      I'm sure the birthday will be a hoot!
      Last edited by Franklin; 02-18-2011 at 09:02 AM.
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      You were crying inside the last time you saw me

      One last glance as you drive away

      You wake up the next morning

      Feeling you cannot live without me

      days of sadness

      followed by days of silence
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      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      I find you weird
      I find you crazy
      I hope you stop
      Following me
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      Half passed three, I should be
      asleep.
      Instead I sneak,
      Creep,
      Lurk DV's community.

      I hear a peep of my mother speak,
      To my father who's sure to freak,
      If he
      should see
      me
      on the PC.

      Numbered sheep I should seek, to free-
      -ly enter deep sleep.
      Instead I keep with this seep-
      -age of "eeps".
      ...
      Maybe
      Two or three
      More peeks
      At these DV artistes.

      -----

      Now repeat
      Three
      Times with speed.

      EDIT: Mom saw me just as I was about to get off. Stealth fail. :[
      Last edited by GavinGill; 02-19-2011 at 11:25 PM.
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      When we come together

      Our heart remember

      The life we shared

      In which

      We killed so many innocent poeple

      Our souls are tortured by guilt
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      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      It is almost night
      And I excitedly await
      The Lucid Dream I will have
      The Lucid dream I desire
      The lucid dream I crave
      The lucid dream that will make me complete
      That.... is what i humbly await...

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      ^ lol teenager
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      I got out of the river
      I'm soaking wet though
      I might go back in
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      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      A lonely soul

      In a world of shadows

      tortured by darkness

      The emptiness pierces my heart

      Longing for a place of comfort

      I sit in the darkness

      waiting

      miserably
      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      Quote Originally Posted by saltyseedog View Post
      A lonely soul

      In a world of shadows

      tortured by darkness

      The emptiness pierces my heart

      Longing for a place of comfort

      I sit in the darkness

      waiting

      miserably
      Your poems aren't the happiest are they........

      Anyways here's mine

      My mouth drools
      My mouth is angry
      he awaits
      the pizza party to begin ^-^

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      Sorry my poems express how I feel... I don't feel like living in delusional happiness
      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      Okay, now I will hold on
      And I will hold on till I forget how it felt
      To remind myself to hold on
      And till I question:
      Was it really necesesary anyways?

      It's not that my life's bad
      No, not at all
      I just struggle with my illusionate misery
      From the world of nowhere
      Till I become happy again
      Livin' in this wonderful rollercoaster
      'Cause when I think about it.. I like it!
      I'd like to be one of those natural scene kids.. They're awsome. Don't you just love their hair?

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      once a fish,
      swam where was wish'd.
      Now a man,
      stuck where I stand.
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      The ability to happily respond to any adversity is the divine.
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      If you had to fight for your life today, would you survive?

      You act as if you wil live forever

      In your comfort zone of false fulfillment
      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      You looked to the earth and the sky

      Trying to understand

      You got it all figured out

      You think you know everything

      But you do not understand

      Inside you

      There is something you ignore

      Your awareness of yourself

      The fire burning in your chest

      Stuck in your fog of your mind

      You cannot see this

      Your mind controls you

      Distracts you

      From seeing the pain
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      Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake

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      Sitting in bed,
      an ache in my head.
      I read of snails
      and long for the trails.
      My poems rhyme
      all the time.
      Holy jeez, dude -
      I could use some food.
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      nautica
      the matrix
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      i want that hat
      from the lincoln highway

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      If yesterday never was
      and tomorrow would never be
      could that mean that
      we would be free?
      I'd like to be one of those natural scene kids.. They're awsome. Don't you just love their hair?

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      breakfast left
      me feeling
      quite content
      I'll see
      them again
      at five
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      your "love" is rotten.
      i'm sad that i gave to you
      the best that i had.

      ...and all you ever gave back were vices, bruises, and heartache.


      Crappy poetry aside, I think I needed to get that out somehow.
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      poems don't have to be vague you know........

      I am sitting
      Not doing much
      Sitting on my laptop
      Writing this poem

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      Quote Originally Posted by saltyseedog View Post
      You looked to the earth and the sky

      Trying to understand

      You got it all figured out

      You think you know everything

      But you do not understand

      Inside you

      There is something you ignore

      Your awareness of yourself

      The fire burning in your chest

      Stuck in your fog of your mind

      You cannot see this

      Your mind controls you

      Distracts you

      From seeing the pain
      I did not want to thank this
      Coz your thanks were 69
      That euphemism never gets old
      It will last for all time






      Moving away were our thought filled eyes
      Gazing in to one another's as machinery wrenched us apart
      One cannot overpower the machine
      But I will never forget
      And you will never forget

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