I'm A Young Money Millionaire

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:32 PM

My attempt at a freestyle. Beware if you are easily offended.

I'm a Millionaire,
I'm a Young Money Millie in aire, tougher than Nigerian hair,
My criteria compared to your career just isnt fair,
I'm a venereal disease like a menstrual bleed...
Threw the pencil and leak the sheet of the tablet in my mind,
Cause I don't write shit cause I ain't got time,
Cause my seconds, minutes, hours go to the al mighty dollar,
And the al mighty power of dat chit cha cha chopper,
Sister, Brother, Son, Daughter, Father motha fuck a copper,
Got da maserati dancin on the bridge pussy poppin,
Tell the coppers... hahahaha you can't catch em, you can't stop em,
I go by them goon rules if you can't beat em then you pop em,
You can't man em then you pop em,
You can't man em then you mop em,
You can't stand em then you drop em,
You drop em cause we pop em like Orville Redenbacher,

A millie in here a millie in there
Sicilian bitch with long hair
with coke in her dairyair
Like smokin the thinest air I open the Lamborghini
Hopin them crackers see like look at dat bastard Weezy
Hes a beast hes, a dog hes, a muthfukin problem
Ok your a goon but what's a goon to a goblin
Nothin nothin you ain't scarin nothin
On some faggot bullshit call em dennis rodman
Call me what you want bitch call me on my Sidekick
Never answer when it's private damn I hate a shy Bitch
Don't u hate a shy bitch yea I ate a shy bitch
And she ain't shy nomore she changed her name to My bitch
Yea nigga that's my bitch so when she ask for the Money when you through don't be surprised bitch
It ain't trickin if u got it
But u like a bitch with no ass u ain't got shit
Muthafuka I'm I'll not sick
And I'm ok but my watch sick
Yea my drop sick
Yea my glock sick
And my knot thick
I it

Muthafuka I'm I'll...

They say I'm rappin like BIG, jay, and tupac
Andre 3000 where is erika baduh at
Who dat
Who dat said dey gon beat lil wayne
My name ain't Bic but I keep dat flame man
Who dat one dat do dat boy ya knew dat tru da Swallow
And I be da shit now u got loose bowels
I don't owe you like two vowels
But I would like for u to pay me by the hour
And I'd rather be pushin flowers
Then to be in the pin sharin showers
Tony told us this world was ours
And the bible told us every girl was sour
Don't play in her garden and don't smell her flower
Call me Mr. Carter or Mr. Lawn Mower
Boy I got so many bitches like I'm Mike Mowry
Even Gwen Stefani said she could'ntdoubt me
Muthafuka I say life ain't shit without me
Chrome lips pokin out the coop like it's poutin
I do what I do and u do what u can do about it
Bitch I can turn a crack rock into a mountian
Damn dat
Don't u compare me cause there ain't noody near me They don't see but they hear me
They don't feel me but they feel me I'm I'll

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 06:34 PM

Get the fuck out of dreamviews.

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:39 PM

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

Get the fuck out of dreamviews.

I see you're not the poetry type..

Also may I request that this is moved to Artists Corner and stickied? THX!

**Satan** · 06-12-2008 06:39 PM

sounds pretty good.. you could use a little work though... other wise idk i was also to lazy to read more the 3 lines ummmmmm... just keep it up.

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 06:40 PM

No.

And listen up you little bastard-- You aren't welcome here.

You have to be at least fifteen or not Wanted[The member] now run along and go play pretend-im-a-badass with your nonexistent friends.

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:41 PM

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

No.

And listen up you little bastard-- You aren't welcome here.

You have to be at least fifteen or not Wanted[The member] now run along and go play pretend-im-a-badass with your nonexistent friends.

This guy thinks you're a fag.

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 06:42 PM

Good for him.

Now get the fuck out.

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:43 PM

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

Good for him.

Now get the fuck out.

I'm quite comfortable, thanks though.

Oh and did I mention you're a faggot?

**Serkat** · 06-12-2008 06:44 PM

KILL IT WITH FIRE
a.

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:45 PM

For people who are interested in my poetry and screenplay, you can find my latest hit at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yV6L...eature=related

Just me and my crew chillin' 'n' shit. Feedback is GREATLY appreciated.

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 06:49 PM

Originally Posted by Burrito

I'm quite comfortable, thanks though.

Oh and did I mention you're a faggot?

Korittke is a new old member; your argument is invalid now get out of this forum and off of my internet!

**Burrito** · 06-12-2008 06:51 PM

Posts: 4,336

fag

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 06:55 PM

No u.

Seriously now.

GET OUT

**Kushna Mufeed** · 06-12-2008 07:08 PM

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

Get the fuck out of dreamviews.

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

No.

And listen up you little bastard-- You aren't welcome here.

You have to be at least fifteen or not Wanted[The member] now run along and go play pretend-im-a-badass with your nonexistent friends.

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

Good for him.

Now get the fuck out.

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

Korittke is a new old member; your argument is invalid now get out of this forum and off of my internet!

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

No u.

Seriously now.

GET OUT

I think he`s serious.

**lagunagirl** · 06-12-2008 07:10 PM

Originally Posted by Kushna Mufeed

I think he`s serious.

I don't think he is

just trying to get attention again

but even if he was serious...

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 07:23 PM

I am serious.

I want this fag to gtfo.

Wanted is underaged and not allowed here!

**Kushna Mufeed** · 06-12-2008 07:38 PM

Originally Posted by lagunagirl

I don't think he is

just trying to get attention again

but even if he was serious...

I was mocking the fact that all of his posts were essentially the same.

**Wavefunction** · 06-12-2008 07:39 PM

Originally Posted by Seismosaur

I am serious.

I want this fag to gtfo.

Maybe you should ban him, then.

...oh, wait.

**Sornaensis** · 06-12-2008 07:40 PM

Originally Posted by Kushna Mufeed

I was mocking the fact that all of his posts were essentially the same.

I was leading up to a big finale

**•Neko•** · 06-13-2008 05:56 AM

Originally Posted by Wavefunction

Maybe you should ban him, then.

...oh, wait.

I think you should hand out some free banhammers sometime soon. How about it?

**Burrito** · 06-13-2008 06:35 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6WhS...related&fmt=18

**Tyler** · 06-13-2008 07:21 PM

Originally Posted by •Neko•

I think you should hand out some free banhammers sometime soon. How about it?

Lol i agree..banhammer needs to be waved.

**Universal Mind** · 06-13-2008 08:12 PM

Originally Posted by Burrito

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6WhS...related&fmt=18

An irrelevant video posted during an argument. Therefore... Mystic alert.

**lagunagirl** · 06-13-2008 10:30 PM

gosh guys, i'm sure burrito hates DV now.

I'm sorry you had to cross paths with seismosaur so early here

**Dreamhope11** · 06-14-2008 01:21 AM

Buritto don't get put off DV because some big headed guy assums he controls who stays and can't stay. Most people come to this forum to learn to get lucid, meet new people, and share, in your case poetry. There are many of us which would love you to stay.

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