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Reply With QuoteI'm guessing you meant Deep?Oh the irony. Also, supercilious seems kind of out of place. It doesn't seem to make sense to me but I dunno, maybe I didn't get it.
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- 02-25-2004 01:30 PM #1Member
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Deap Poem of life....
Ricochet
I am a puppet
I rise inside the darkness of an supercilious soul
Desire is my unexpected mistress
Trapped inside this excrutiation bowl
Oh why? Destiny defies the very purpose
Of he who listen to a world that has collapsed
Insuficient is the love that one has given
When betrayed by fate in the friendly fire of the pastIf I hadn't made me
I'd be more inclined to bow
Powers that be would have swallowed me up
But that's more than I can allow...
- 03-01-2004 11:02 AM #2Member
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And We'll Pray, That There's No God To Punish Us.
You'll Spend 20 Years Wind Up Alone, Demented.
- 03-01-2004 11:58 AM #3Member
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Oh, you got it alright, if there was something to get... Actually I just made it up at the spot, and was laughing my ass off as I did. I tried to make it seem deep, but have it actually mean nothing. I just realized...that can be considered a post-modernist poem; it lack real meaning, thus words mean nothing....
I think I did a pretty good job!
P.S. The "deap" part was intentional, thus completing this masterpiece...If I hadn't made me
I'd be more inclined to bow
Powers that be would have swallowed me up
But that's more than I can allow...
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