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    1. 01-03-2004 01:22 AM #1
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      my poem.

      yeah. i made a poem about my car. i got a C- on it. i think its genius...


      --The Bronco--

      Eight potent cylinders firing on command
      Nothing will stop her, not even two feet of sand

      Three hundred and two cubic inches of blue fury
      Fed into four eleven gears, makes her scurry

      She's a murderer of small foreign cars
      And because of that she's gained scars

      When all pistons are pumping it's a thing of bliss
      Days come when she wont budge, save for a kiss

      She's a founding member of the great S.C.C.
      She loves to chauffeur Owen and me

      Alas I must leave her for college, I'll put her past me
      Maybe I'll give her to Christy or Ashley

      -brings a tear to my eye.

      i would post artwork but i give all my art away.
      clear eyes. strong hands.
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    2. 01-03-2004 06:51 PM #2
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      lol....I wouldn't be one to comment here. I personaly don't really like rhyming poems. nor do I care for cars. *shrugs* but it's nice.


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    3. 01-03-2004 09:13 PM #3
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      haha, i slapped it together in like 5 minutes. it had to fit a certain criteria and syllable count or something like that. but i just winged it... i know im bad ass like that.
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