Thread: This Poem I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think :)

I wrote it for an English class, we had to write a sonnet...I was the only one who actually wrote one for class and I gave it to mmy teacher, but he didn't say anything about it...Anyway, tell me what you think and if you have any suggestions Personally, I don't like the last verses... they just don't seem to fit in with the atmosphere of the rest of the poem...


Neverending Story

And yet, another match I dare to light
And in my hand I watch it die.
I throw it away, such a glorious sight,
Mountains of ash facing the sky.

And yet, another wish I dare to make
On a star that only I can see
"Make me good, for goodness' sake!"
And it drowns into the sea.

And yet, I dream when I close my eyes
And sink in his blue poetic stare.
The alarm goes off and it all dies
It's never right, and it's never there.

Dreaming on must be man's true glory,
This hazy, neverending story.