This idea really appeals to me

I like the idea of the community writing a story as a big team.
Some questions/comments about the story:
1. Where do these dream-beings come from? You said they were left over from the mind of the first lucid dreamer... are they all part of one person, this lucid dreamer? did his mind explode and create them?
2. I like the idea of wards on the dreamworld (placed there, I'm guessing by the Atlantians?)
3. So the aliens want to merge reality with the dream world, making everything like a big lucid dream for them? And what happens to the humans?
4. I love the idea of Seeker as a kind of ancient atlantian wise man... a mix between Gandalf the grey and yoda

. Oh and admin, mods and DGs as as the kind of elite atlantian network is cool too.
Suggestions:
- I think that part of the beginning should include a new illness breaking out - it randomely strikes anyone. This is the result of the aliens "draining" dreamers. Just to show that they are evil from the start
Have the aliens been in the dream world since the beginning of time? Or are they trying to conquer earth and can only .... exist in the dream world for now?

i dunno...
I hope I helped a bit
just finish by saying i really hope this succeeds - i'd love to see a story written by us about us
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