My favorite one! Honestly..
Very good imagery here..from beggining to end. I like how this dream follows a rather reasonable plot from beggining to end. Not exactly sensible but heheh..it is a dream. Your description of the cave itself and the disc got my mind's eye going...I could almost "see" it..resulting from a good use of imagery (again) and words. When you go on to describe the trial going on and the angry..foul cave people..you get me a bit queezy as well..I'd say that this is what hooked me onto this dream..as sick as it sounds..that disgusting, oozing goo...I'm glad I wasn't in there with you...I wouldn't have been strong enough to hold back my stomach contents
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I don't blame ya for not giving CPR...damn, that's horribly nasty.
I like this one as I said..short story-like..my favorite of the others you posted too :p




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. Your description of the cave itself and the disc got my mind's eye going...I could almost "see" it..resulting from a good use of imagery (again) and words. When you go on to describe the trial going on and the angry..foul cave people..you get me a bit queezy as well..I'd say that this is what hooked me onto this dream..as sick as it sounds..that disgusting, oozing goo...I'm glad I wasn't in there with you...I wouldn't have been strong enough to hold back my stomach contents
It was sick enough that I actually had to see that she had a mouthful of all that stuff. 



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