Poem: Hopelessness

Hopelessness

I wish this pain would
Stop, the feeling of
Powerlessness threatens
To tip me over the edge.

I see your face, hear
Your voice, see your
Smile
And I know it’s worth it.

I want someone to hold
Me tight, tell me its okay,
That it’s alright to cry,
And be angry.

I know you understand,
And that’s the greatest
Comfort of all,
To have you by my side.

this one's important to me.

Being alone is defintly a feeling of hopelessness. I felt some sadness in your writing. I like to read poems were you can feel the emotion coming out of it. keep up the good work. and don't stop posting your writings. :mrgreen:

Thanks for your comments!!
I'm glad you liked it, although it's important to me, i don't think it's one of my better ones.
I think i rushed it, i came home one night and just threw it down on paper.