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      Pinkcheese's Random Scribbles


      I decided to make this my official random scribble thread...so there's going to be more than one poem here. Figured I wouldn't spam up the forum with too many unneeded threads.


      I was in math, and I scribbled this down. I know it's short, but I thought it went along fairly well compared to the nothing that I've been writing lately.
      I might add more to it later...or something.
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      wake up to the silence
      a never-ending new
      wake up to the screaming
      they're calling out to you

      we'll take it step by step
      but now we're falling through
      this eternally boundless sky
      it's just a clouded blue

      the long forgotten sunshine
      the faded memory true
      perhaps one lonely day
      my tears will then fade, too

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      If THAT'S a random scribble, then your other stuff must put Shakespeare and Chaucer to shame!

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      Ooh,

      Thats good!
      These are the tears that I dream about...

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      kick ass stuff. There should be a "Random Skribbles" thread dedicated to these quick writings or random skribbles and let everyone type something random and see what we come out with.

      Good stuff man.


      Are we dreaming?

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      I didn't think it was that good!
      Thanks for all the comments you guys!
      @Joth: Yeah, maybe it could be a sticky so everyone could see it and get to it...?

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      i liked it.
      nice and simple, not too complcated
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      Please turn me off
      I don't want to be at your mindless command
      Cut off my feelings
      So that I won't be held under your reprimand
      Make me cold
      So that I cannot hurt anymore
      Blind my eyes
      For when you show me the door
      Close my ears
      So I can't hear you scream
      Scar my heart
      So my victory I can redeem

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      I've been searching for you for so long,
      I've forgotten where to land.
      Each step is getting heavier,
      But I still believe that I can.

      It's my last resort.
      My hope in the dark.
      A comfort on the wind
      When things become stark.

      Sometimes I get lost.
      My feet lead me astray.
      But in a never-ending effort,
      You pull me from the fray.

      This is my last retort.
      To prove to you that I can
      Do anything for you.
      It's my bleeding plan.

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      I've been your friend for this long and you never told me you were such an amazing poet!? Seriously, that was awesome.

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      When you publish your anthology 'cheeser, will you mention me? Pleeeeeeease?

      Thanks for sharing all of your amazing stuff!
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      Originally posted by Rakkantekimusouka
      When you publish your anthology 'cheeser, will you mention me? Pleeeeeeease?

      Thanks for sharing all of your amazing stuff!
      :cough:YesIdidhavetolookthatupinthedictionary:coug h:
      But I doubt I'm ever going to publish anything, I'm not that good.

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      Alright, woke up in the middle of the night, definate random, very short scribble. Perhaps I'll expand on it later.

      double identity
      my perfect enemy
      who I want to be
      and then who others choose to see
      it's my double identity



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      Seriously, Mel, if you were to pursue poetry as a career, you would get published. I'm not joking at all. If these are just scribbles then... o_o

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      Actually I think her stuff would make awesome song lyrics...you should become a lyricist or whatever the hell it's called.

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      Originally posted by lucidnina
      Actually I think her stuff would make awesome song lyrics...you should become a lyricist or whatever the hell it's called.
      Hmmm...never thought about that before.

      Maybe I should give it a shot...?

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      Feeling so broken
      so endlessly lost
      in this heaven
      but pain is it's cost

      flawed perfection
      supposedly gone
      but perfection is
      just one big con

      my wings can't carry
      my soul in this place
      I lay doomed in this land
      tears down my face

      I'll cry out to someone
      anyone at all
      but then they all gather
      just to watch me fall

      feeling so broken
      the pieces lay around me
      but only the sadness
      can one day set me free

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      it's older...who cares.
      -----
      "Forgetting You"
      -----
      every step i take,
      every mile i make
      gets me closer to
      forgetting you
      and all of the things that you do
      as i slowly fade out of view

      my sore muscles are a blessing
      one more excuse I'm confessing
      cause i'm so tired of you
      forgetting you
      that's all i want to do
      run to the sky so blue

      i'll run no matter how far
      shoes on hard tar
      got to get away
      forgetting you
      never for two
      always for you

      my feet hurt...my heart hurts more
      one more step, and I'll be out the door
      because forgeting you
      is my last, too
      to the sky so blue
      and i'm doing it for you

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      How did you get so good!? Honestly, you're amazing. Whether you believe me or not, you're freaking amazing there.

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      Originally posted by Gothlark
      How did you get so good!? Honestly, you're amazing. Whether you believe me or not, you're freaking amazing there.
      Thanks.

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      I fixed the other poem.

      it's this emptyness inside of me
      that makes me who i seem to be
      and if ever you were to ask
      i'd surely take off this mask
      and pour my troubles to you

      it's just a double identity
      my perfect enemy
      who i want to be
      and then who others choose to see
      keeping me forever chained

      sometimes i feel the pained need
      to give up all this childish greed
      and show you who i really am
      but would you even give a damn?
      it hurts always

      so when i think about forever
      you and me, possibly together
      i finally understand the lie
      and all my dreams begin to fry
      as the tears flow

      dreaming of what the future would bring
      but nothing feels like anything
      feeling hopeless, lost, and tired
      the opposite of who i'd admired
      a sense of utter shame

      lifting body over feet
      someday again we might meet
      getting up is harder than the fall
      but you taught me
      nothing's worth it all

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      I can feel the pain...

      Beautiful work, 'cheeser.
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