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      An Impromptu Verse or Two

      Softly thinking, I see your outline in the sand
      The waves wash over you, as I reach out my hand

      To meet someone so much like me,
      In strength, desire, audacity

      I think of what might be from afar
      If for only one moment we could forget who we are

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      Is this for everyone to think of a impromptu Verse or Two? (i would like to join in if it is )

      I like your style of writing

      that picture at the bottom looks like Johnathan Davis
      "I was looking back to see if you were looking back at me to see me looking back at you".



      Be Here Now

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      That would be great if others also put some verse here.

      Go for it.
      Only your mind can see the future

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      Dreamatu

      Beneath ivory towers, foundations deep
      Memories of hidden angst did creep

      Forever moaning, lusting, groaning
      Hoping one day to rule the world

      From exalted peeks, daylight sleeps
      But night has found a home

      Accepting eyes that ignore the truth
      May noble causes be not in vain

      And comely brides forever joy
      In lovely touches and lustful boys

      To be renounced of pride and hate
      Til' all the world accept its fate

      Trodden down by foot of man
      In ignorance of simple plans

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      I really like the first one EJ....it reminds me of something I'm going through.

      I'll have to read the second one later, when I don't have so many people up my butt. =/

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      nah Ob..i like the first one...much more poignant!

      hmm...i'm not good at impromptu...
      lemme think about it!

      ah, i know...this isn't gonna be brilliant!



      Standing on the edge
      Of something she doesn't understand,
      she waits for a sign.
      which way to turn?

      Forward is the unknown,
      safety is back behind her.
      But what does she want?

      The dark mystery of a new
      sensation, or the safety of what she
      knows already?

      It's pull is stronger than she,
      she holds out her arms,
      and steps off the edge,
      and finds wings to fly.

      Okay, so it has no title, and i think it's rather nonsensical..only i understand it.
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      I love your signature picture Irishcream.

      Ok....extemp...


      Daring visions of mortal men and elfish women

      Sparing the pain of secrets told

      Of anxieties vague and old

      Planted by religious deceit

      To keep us bound hands and feet

      But all freedom comes with a price

      Mixed with tears in Irish glenns

      When merry lovers dance among the ferns

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      hey, i like that!

      it puts me in mind of the tale of Aragorn and Arwen in The Lord of the Rings...he was mortal, she was an elf...such a sad tale...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      distance is the saviour
      the safe glorious emptiness
      soul slowly draining
      will disappear anyday now.

      closeness is the saviour
      the warm glowing fire
      but each cut takes a piece
      the end is the same

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      Nice voidofform!

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      another:
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      lies
      truth
      what difference does it make
      and why do you care?

      trust me
      trust you
      with piece of my security
      why should i risk anything?

      piece of you
      piece of me
      you had more than enough
      i've given all i'm willing to.

      proof of concept
      proof of authenticity
      given the evidence
      no wonder you're suspicious

      my self
      my soul
      is not your soul
      walk away there's no point here

      bemused
      confused
      i have to wonder
      why do you care?

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      deep calls to deep
      scars to scars
      emptiness to emptiness

      each alone in the dark
      but together in existence
      makes lonely loneliness

      in the endless black
      a secret is told
      that souls can touch and be reborn

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      patiently quietly study my mind
      defiantly quietly embedded in time

      little oblivion
      triumph of laughter

      the hangman does smile
      despite his demise

      add numbers to be multiplied
      countries to be divided

      who shall bare witness
      to a woman so chided

      exuberant in youth
      bitter in mothering

      a world of lost children
      rush to the smothering

      do feel and do see
      what has been lost by the free

      when taken by fear
      they do hide every tear

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