Thread: IPhone Drawing

Nice job! Few things...the shadow looks a bit harsh, maybe you could lighten it up a little? Also the plane of the table or whatever it is sitting on ends at a rather awkward point, almost in line with the top of the...uh...fruit? What is that btw? At first I thought it was an orange, but I notice that you did a nice job of creating texture on the table so you probably wouldn't have ignored the texture on an orange if it was one. The shading on the questionable fruit is nice, as are the colors, and texture of the thing it's sitting on. I also notice that it appears to be glowing. Which was either for effect or I'm really really wrong about it being any sort of fruit lol. Also, I only bother critiquing art that I really like...so I hope you don't think I'm trying to criticize or anything because I don't like it. Quite the opposite.

Wow thanks I really appreciate it. I never posted one of my artworks online before. Thanks for the constructive criticism thats the only way to get better right? I just found out if you click it once it enlarges the picture but if you click the enlarged picture it enlarges even more and then you can see the detail on the orange (yes you got it right it is a fruit ). Once again thanks for taking a look at my picture im working on makefile more. I am currently putting the picture on an IPhone Photoshop app to bring out the colors Ill post it when I finish.