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      I'm so cold
      I can't get these things off of me
      These thoughts, these feelings like pestilent mold
      Still hasn't changed and now I'm 23
      The world so alive but me so dead
      The street is my canvas
      Let me paint it red
      Going on a trip better grab the atlas
      The only stop motel 6 and in bed

      Would it be okay with you
      Could I take you in two's
      Judge me left and right
      But the night's so ripe
      When they get on my trail
      Don't get caught it's 25 to life in jail
      You won't receive sympathy in trial
      But that's okay I'll admit it with a smile
      See I'm the accountability-responsibility type
      If you ask if I did it I won't lie
      If you did it then you did it and I certainly did
      So catch me if you can but I'll be clean, I don't kid
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      insomniac super-stack
      sleep's not a chance, totally whack
      what was that
      oh just the faceless guy wearing a hat
      wait what, i can almost hear what they're saying now
      voices of the people on nameless programs mumbling, wow
      when's the last time I ate again
      right, back 12 hours ago with the fam
      googling this and that, what was I thinking
      fuck I can't remember, why is the floor creaking
      don't worry it's gotta be the cat, gotta be the cat
      but what if it isn't i don't know where my knife's at
      man I just need to get some rest
      wake up later this evening, my hair a mess
      but sleep is still so far away even though I'm so uncomfortable
      maybe if I just close my eyes for a second, surely I'll be able....


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      yeah right, I fucking wish.
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      snoop writing another poem
      stop the presses, beginning to feel like Golum
      but I can't help it I'm just in a writing mood
      I eat this shit up more than I do delicious food
      You can look the other way I'm just the poem thread troll
      You wanna cross this bridge, gotta pay a toll
      I write of murder, bronies, insomnia too
      look at me I'm making more creative poo

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      I'm attracted to the unknown
      Yet I'm terrified
      It's too uncomfortable here
      Every time I wake inside, I don't know where I am
      The beauty of the sunset draws me to a place of adventure
      Time for lift off
      It's going to be one hell of a flight
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      Highs and lows, how it always goes,
      Everyday fits, feeling mixed.

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      I feel a pain in my chest where my love used to be
      And a pessimism that shades everything that I see

      I feel it is wrong, yet the gloom just persists
      My own sense of reason can't even shake this
      Like a drug I am hooked and cannot resist
      The idea that romantic love almost never exists!

      Is it our hearts that are wounded by love lost?
      Or is it our minds that pay the ultimate cost?

      By opening up, there is much to be gained
      But believe me when I say it does not come without pain
      As much as my soul still loves a good rain
      The desire for some sunshine will always remain.

      Maybe that's why I was once willing to try
      But in this life who needs another reason to cry?

      It's better to have loved and lost, they say
      But when will the "10 second heartbreak" go away?

      Like dreams love vanishes in the light of each new day
      Making even the most vibrant colours seem grey.
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      Every night I lie dreaming
      Lucid sights of what could be
      The sun shone down gleaming
      Rays of golden glory poured down on me

      I wondered where this came from
      This burning, aching desire
      My heart was once numb
      Now it’s dancing like flames of a fire

      The magnificent scene that surrounds me
      Is such a sacred sight
      It’s like sweet, sweet poetry
      With words that come to life

      There comes a time to awaken
      And face the harsh reality
      Now my eyes are open
      But I can no longer see
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      I dream a lot, need not be asleep.

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      Quote Originally Posted by ElsiaStar View Post
      Every night I lie dreaming
      Lucid sights of what could be
      The sun shone down gleaming
      Rays of golden glory poured down on me

      I wondered where this came from
      This burning, aching desire
      My heart was once numb
      Now it’s dancing like flames of a fire

      The magnificent scene that surrounds me
      Is such a sacred sight
      It’s like sweet, sweet poetry
      With words that come to life

      There comes a time to awaken
      And face the harsh reality
      Now my eyes are open
      But I can no longer see
      I think this one needs to be published, beautiful words.
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      The end is in sight,
      what's that? a new beginning
      ushered in by an age of pathetic fucktards
      screaming and crying about making peace and love, not war
      reality and understanding is all functional
      the sands of time slip by, the universal constant, mr. chong's cruncy egg rolls
      oh so dericious, tasty, and moist
      i love this shit, the all is my creator and gives words to my voice
      is this it, the day of reckoning?
      the early bird catches worm and the angels sing
      the religious cacophony, the song of chaos and discord
      are we really so stupid, no matter, i am your shield and your sword
      let me be the man you couldn't be
      see the world through my eyes and you realize things are quite what they seem
      real eyes realize real lies but do i know how to reel the fish in from these fishing lines
      well, speak for yourself, i'm just a line without a hook
      cut all ties with my past life, no smoking in the kitchen, guess i can't cook
      that's alright i love trying, learning, understanding, processing and doing new things
      what's life but a game, and we're all puppets but nobody's controlling the strings

      Poet's that don't know it are great and all, but self realization is the glory that binds us all. So won't you sing with me on this glorious day? Snow white's seven little dwarves, so happy, dopey, mopey, and sneezy. Why do people still listen to the likes of lil' wayne and young jeezy? The time is now, the author is you, give me that fishing pole, I can show you a thing or two.

      Not quite a poem, but the truth.

      I've yet to meet a dream character smarter than I. I am the epitome of self-realization, God is me and I am subject to his will to do as She and He sees fit. To do otherwise is unbecoming of me. I am a slave no longer, a being of free will. I am the light that shines in the darkness, piercing the hull of the ship that claims never to sink. I am one impressive son of a bitch, I think, therefore I am, I am a will, a spirit, and I exist.
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      Pink Floyd are the Atom Heart Mother, so warm and milky, Alan's psychedelic breakfest, eggs and toast, oh man I can't see anything my vision is obscured by clouds, what's that? it's the dark side of the moon! no way, im tripping the fuck out to this righteous tune. the madman, he's in my hallways, he's all i can see and here. the lunatic, he smiles and brings me nice things like whiskey champagne and beer.now i'm crying, my eyes so teary, be that as it may, floyd heywood r bout to save the day. i like being an animal, we all really try, we are so much bigger than the great gig in the sky. the sheep like to laze around, the dogs come to herd them, the pigs are fat and think they control the dogs but really in the end it's the dogs that eat them. delicious bacon watches emily play, money is the root of all evil, the sum of our fears. listen now to the echoes reerberating off the walls live in pompeii, frozen ice and glass chandeliers. the piercing screams speak to our hearts but have yet to reach our minds, the gun has shot but you forgot how to run, why keep running in this mind numbing marathon? then a light like a glowstick strikes you suddenly and violently you cry, i am alive and i don't want to die! fuck your friends, better hide your kids and hide your wife, all of your friends are gone, time to die. tears in rain glisten like the snow in antarctica, the lungs of a newborn cry and wail in fantastic orgasmic explosions. the silience stiffens like the hairs on the back of your neck, did that really happen, am i alive or dead?

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      Sitting on this seat,
      Listening to mad beats.
      Trying to study but my focus is weak.
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      A poem about insomnia

      Tick tock,
      The brain doesn’t stop.
      3am, what’s it like for them?
      Blissfully deep,
      Trapped in their sleep.
      I lie in sheets, counting sheep.
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      My take on sleep paralysis, kinda from my own experience before I knew what it was, but also from another story too.

      That sound, what was it?
      Clinging to the wall,
      It stares, unblinking.
      Writhing, it crawls.
      My heart is sinking, racing.
      My breath is thin, pacing.
      I am Petrified like stone,
      In the dark on my own.
      The devil has come.
      The devil has come.
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      "Birds in the morning at 5am"

      A beauty unfettered,
      Comes the noise of the feathered.
      A cacophonous boom,
      For a morning tune.
      They sing soft and light,
      To the morning bloom.
      Saying farewell to the night,
      And good morning to you.

      pretty cheesy i know >_< I heard thousands and thousands of birds chirping away this morning and felt like writing a poem about it
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      Bravery.

      Nothing gutsy in being a leader.
      Just tell others what to do.
      Instead, stand in front of leaders,
      And sing a song or 2.
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      Quote Originally Posted by werty52 View Post
      "Birds in the morning at 5am"

      A beauty unfettered,
      Comes the noise of the feathered.
      A cacophonous boom,
      For a morning tune.
      They sing soft and light,
      To the morning bloom.
      Saying farewell to the night,
      And good morning to you.

      pretty cheesy i know >_< I heard thousands and thousands of birds chirping away this morning and felt like writing a poem about it
      Cheesy? Not at all
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      Cliff Fall Accident
      My confidence overstretched,
      I plummet to the depth.
      Disbelief, how can it be?
      I lie there, incomplete.
      Shouts from above,
      My friend thinks I'm deceased.
      He disappears for a while,
      As the tide encroaches.
      I crawl through the dirt,
      My wound wrapped in a shirt.
      I climb up the edge,
      And rest my weary head.
      The helicopter comes,
      It sweeps me off the ledge.
      In the moments before,
      I thought I was poor.
      My life is enriched,
      With the loved ones that I miss.
      I know this now,
      And I've made a vow.
      "Do not forget, do not forget,
      That hollow moment of approaching death".

      A poem I wrote today about a near-death experience several weeks ago. I fell 25 metres off the side of a cliff and landed on a beach below. I was a few inches from slamming my head on the boulders beneath where we'd be climbing. The tide was nearly in too, and I had to crawl across the enclosed beach and onto a ledge. I had been left to think there for a couple hours about how close it had been, and how lucky I had been to only damage my leg. My friend called the search and rescue and I was able to get out though.

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      ^^ Dayamn O_O

      Glad you made it through that one, and not just for the resulting badass poem.
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      Quote Originally Posted by snoop
      Cheesy? Not at all.
      I agree wholeheartedly.
      These poems are very much the opposite of cheesy.

      The first three lines and the the last four lines of the cliff poem really stand out to me. The last two lines especially echo on after you read them, in a way only poetic words can.
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      The hazy sky takes clear form,
      contrasting clouds now against clear blue,
      something distant and far away,
      seems to speak of legends.

      Mundane and routine is the chore,
      gathering the leaves with the rake,
      yet the feeling of forevermore,
      abides in the soul where heart aches.

      Distantly, I take your hand,
      where are you, can you say?
      Speak to me in my dreams,
      we will meet in time unknown.

      In this time of brokenness,
      my angel fly with me,
      defeat is not the way of ours,
      hope will guide us until the end.

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      Another lyric; not sure what I'll call this one. I want to call it Lonely Island, but that's just a bit too close to the "threw it on the ground" group.
      10-14-14



      You and me upon an island
      Where the storm did finally end
      And when I brush aside some pride,
      Somewhere I see inside
      That you would leave, my friend

      So I'll lay upon this island
      And be happy I'm away
      I ain't seen no-one today
      It's real peaceful on this sand
      Yeah, man - I think I'll stay


      Here
      Keeping my feet in oceans warm
      I ain't troubled by no storm
      Hey, lady, come and stay

      Here
      You've got no cause to watch your back
      You've got no need to stay on track
      Come on and lose yourself


      I've been years walking in these trees
      I know 'em all by name
      The wind says you're alright
      And that you live a useful life
      But this world stays the same

      Just peace of mind and warméd sands
      I know you're out there in your lands
      Just come and stay


      Here
      Keeping my feet in oceans warm
      I ain't troubled by no storm
      Hey, stranger, come and stay

      Here
      I'd beg a friend if e're could
      Why can't this all be good
      This lonely island?



      Somehow, mixing "e're" and "ain't" just... seems a bit incongruous...
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      A new stomach has grown
      Within the depths of my mind.
      Desiring to be shown
      What I could never find.

      I used to ignore it´s emptiness
      And I could continue to play dumb.
      But I am no longer numb
      To the pain of loneliness.

      This young hermit’s heart
      Used to escape from all company.
      It has become too good at this art
      To change its native philosophy.

      But now that all I crave for
      Is a long loving relation.
      I am filled with fear for
      My own starvation.

      Deep inside I know
      That someone is out there
      Who could keep my body at flow
      If only she were here.

      Oh my sweet savior
      If only you could hear my scream.
      For you, I´d change my behavior
      If you were more than just a dream.
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      Violence is for those who are too weak to solve problems with words.

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      As humans, why do we care?
      Each morning ritual performed without thought, now I'm brushing my hair
      Why am I doing this?
      Why do I exist?
      Why am I here?
      What's the point of a world without fear?
      It's liberating, having faith, free from the clutches of the unknown
      But each emotion like an invaluable token, beautiful on its own
      Life without motivation
      Difficult to fight temptation
      We give in to our desires
      And we keep starting fires
      Life without passion, art, expression, and prose
      Empty, a ghost in the shell, hollow, every walking being our foes
      But we have to remind ourselves not to forget
      Why we keep living and never rest
      Until our dying day, when the last breath is exhaled
      God is you, your brother, mother, sister, father, rejoice life is a splendor to be hailed!
      But you are not God, the semantics are important
      Don't overstep your bounds, don't buy into the bullshit
      We are special in our own ways, each unique and capable of great things
      Until we die, the devil cries, and the angels sing.

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      Quote Originally Posted by snoop View Post
      Empty, a ghost in the shell[...]
      I see what you did there...
      (and sorry if it was unintentional - it's just an anime reference.)
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      Try to imagine a life without timekeeping. You probably can’t. You know the month, the year, the day of the week; you have a schedule, a calendar... Yet all around you, timekeeping is ignored. Birds are not late. A dog does not check its watch. Deer do not fret over passing birthdays. Man alone measures time. Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, man alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures.
      A fear of time running out.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Signet View Post
      I see what you did there...
      (and sorry if it was unintentional - it's just an anime reference.)
      Totally was, glad you got it man lol

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