Post your freestyle or raps

Title says it all, so post anything you've created yourself, whatever quality/topic/length.

It doesn't matter if you've never tried before, or if you've never listened to any type of rap/hip-hop/freestyling. In fact, that could be a good thing, since you'd be creating your own style, uninfluenced by other styles of rap. Use it to convey your thoughts, tell a story, explore a concept, etc. anything you like.



So here is my contribution which I just made up in the last hour. I wanted to try something new out, so it's different to my other shit:

I smoked a fat sack and kicked back to relax
but with no snacks I had to follow your tracks, carrying an axe
that I bought from the store, cos weed has no tax
Was hacking at your door, when my mind sidetracks

I saw a cop car, it wasn't too far
Knocked on his window, asked for a gun and some ammo
He examined me from head to toe, shrugs
proceeded to say I should forgo drugs
Thinking this is wise, but hating what it implies
I prepare to outwit the devil in disguise

I admit that I don't have a crime to commit
but it has adverse effects, and now he suspects
So then I feign submission, eradicate the suspicion
halt radio transmission, to limit the opposition

He told me to leave, or a penalty I'd receive
But I'm too busy thinking of what I can achieve
With faulty cognition, I reach for his keys in the ignition
though I fail my mission, and so then make him a proposition
in acquisition of spells from a metabolic magician
for permission to continue on this drug fueled expedition

ima six foot three 200 and 10 lbp, silverback grrrilla thumpn' my chest deep from the south

1 bar and i'm out, nannar to the dome bytchez!

also, HERE is a site that is kind of slow, but if you dig deep enough you will find some really good poetry.