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      Good Poem?

      -My Greatest Pleasure-
      Sometimes I wonder how lucky one man can get,
      The luckiest moment I ever had was when we first met.
      I remember it like it was just the other day,
      You were perfect in every single way.
      I was sad and empty inside,
      Then I met you, and all of that began to hide.
      Looking back I didn't know what I'd find.
      Now, I can't seem to get you out of my mind.
      I realize that you are a priceless treasure,
      To be with you would be my greatest pleasure.
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      How many like this poem? (Please rate from 1-10)

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      hm...not really my thing, honestly. I'd say 5. doesn't mean it's not good, it's a personal preference...thing. I do like the last line though. bah...ignore me.


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