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    1. 05-23-2005 06:05 PM #1
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      Another poem...

      Okay, not quite sure what to call this one...i was thinking 'exorcism' but i don't know...

      I flew fast and i flew far.
      I thought i'd outrun you.
      Until the day i found you
      on the beach.

      It was the colour of the sea,
      the pounding of the waves.
      The taste of salt on my lips.
      I knew all this, and i knew
      you were with me.

      The nights I dreamed of you,
      when you were more real to me
      than ever.
      The way i missed you, the minute
      i awoke.

      The man into whose eyes i looked,
      plumbing the depths, searching,
      hoping there would be some
      resemblance of you, and then
      maybe i could have forgotten it all.

      To me, you are the sea, the sky,
      the sand.
      The salt on my lips.
      I need them both, but can oly have
      one of you.
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'
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    2. 05-24-2005 03:15 AM #2
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      You sound like a woman... very womanesque poem...

      Up with the dope, down with the pope!
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    3. 05-24-2005 09:25 AM #3
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      yes i am a woman...not that that matters.
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'
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    4. 07-14-2005 05:03 AM #4
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      I just wanted to say that I was browsing through here and saw this poem.
      Very beautiful. I like the descriptions.
      Keep on writing, irishcream


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    5. 07-14-2005 01:44 PM #5
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      yeah, i haven't written anything for a while...a couple of very personal ones that i didn't post...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'
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    6. 07-14-2005 02:46 PM #6
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      Well, keep at it. Even a few sentences can convey more meaning than a novel.
      By the way--I adore your avatar. I love that movie "Titanic" and that time period.


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    7. 07-14-2005 06:16 PM #7
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      oh, thanks...i seem to just have a general obsession with that movie, i'm not sure why...
      i've always been fascinated by that necklace...
      Maybe, if i marry a rich man, i'll find a jeweller, and get him to make me one!
      Yeah, right, dream on!
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'
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    8. 07-15-2005 12:14 AM #8
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      LOL
      I think I sense the perfect dream control scenario for you


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    9. 07-15-2005 03:45 PM #9
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      what, you mean, not sinking the Titanic? Done that already, by changing the position of a lighthouse!!
      *yawn*
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'
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