Hi Yacka! |
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Hey I am yacka, so i finished work today and i felt weird so i wrote this story |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
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Hi Yacka! |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
Well, as I said, I like the storyline, it really has a dark and creepy feel--I personally love something like that. It seems vaguely psychological, but leaves the possibility of paranormal. I would suggest maybe being more descriptive. For example, take the following: |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
Yeah i wasn't very descriptive because i was in a rush and needed to go haha So i just tried to write it as fast as i could! |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
Send me a private message if you want to chat about anything!
I'm sure you have, maybe not by name. He wrote The Lord of the Rings trilogy |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
Ohh yeah now I know who he is |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
Send me a private message if you want to chat about anything!
I've already posted one here, a short story I wrote called Crimson Dragon: Birth of an Assassin |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
I just found it, i will read it soon! |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
Send me a private message if you want to chat about anything!
Yeah, I've written two of them; but so far I haven't gotten any literary agents interested. Buuuut, I haven't submitted to many yet, either. Both of them are close to 100k words, so they're full length too. The Crimson Dragon short story is basically a short prequel to another novel I am working on. What about you, do you have any novels or novella's you've written yet? |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
WOW! 100,000 words! sheesh! How old are you? |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
Send me a private message if you want to chat about anything!
I'm 27, lol. I wrote that between college semesters, as It is hard to write ANYTHING when overflowed with work. That said, once edited a bit more properly, I expect the word count on that one to drop to the 90k range. |
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Dream Related Goals:
have at least 1 lucid dream this month [X] | remember 1 dream every night 1 week in a row [X ] | Successful MILD this month [X] | Successful WILD this month [ ]
Hey age doesn't really matter! Yeah i understand the difficulties of overflow! Still 90,000 is a lot of words! |
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I am a guy who just want's to dream!
Send me a private message if you want to chat about anything!
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