Goodnight, Sweet Dreams

So I had my first full on experience of sleep paralysis the other night and afterwards, I was really shaken up by it and really did not want to go to sleep so I decided to document it by writing about it on one of my favorite sites, creepypasta. After completing it, I submitted it to some narrators on Youtube to narrate it for me and get it a bit more publicity and one of them has done so!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=caqCIDsp-Ko
That is the link to the narration and I'll also include a link to the original written version if you'd like to read along.
23,000 people have seen the video and I'm so proud and excited I can't even explain it. Please watch and enjoy and offer your critique if you wish, this is my first official working aside from a really bad one I did almost a year ago which still got 8/10 in reviews on the website but I was not pleased with :mwahaha:

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