My Music Songs and Channel

Howdy!!!

just wanted to share my youtube channel with all of you where i release my music, i like G-funk, Rap, Hip Hop, Trap usually, but other music like RnB is dope too! I also recently started writing and finishing songs

here is my channel:
https://www.youtube.com/user/spartakosmusic

and my new recent songs:
American Dream: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=atfMCG_SzK0
Three Hundred: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XIUy0UU62n8

Much love to all of you, i appreciate any genuine and honest feedback.. and sugguestions.. and tips!

Hey, I listened to your songs, and I think they are good.

You are so good with words. I really have a hard time with that.

I think one thing you can do to embellish your works further is add a counter-melody (not really the right word, since it's rapped, but YKWIM?) on the keyboard, or voice, towards the end of the song (like when you're doing your last verse and chorus or so). Think Depeche Mode - how they layer their keyboard tracks. You might want to add a bridge, although they sound good without them. These ones sound pretty finished, but I think future songs could benefit from a 3rd musical part that is a little bit different from the chorus/verses. Think Beatles, notice how their bridges have a transition chord that is different, yet the music/melody flows to it pretty easily. They are masters of that, and it is my honest 100% opinion that it is the most critical element in song writing. Getting the perfect bridge transition.

Anyways, I am no expert, but I do love writing music. I wish you the best, you have a talent for sure. Keep up your awesome work.

:fro::awesomed::awesomed::tunes:

YEAH MAN!!!

I just want to add. It takes a lot of courage to post your art - honestly, there's not many things more intimate if you ask me. Bravo on your courage. Also, I wouldn't mind kidnapping you and forcing you to write lyrics for me :mwahaha:

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Originally Posted by MoonageDaydream

I just want to add. It takes a lot of courage to post your art - honestly, there's not many things more intimate if you ask me. Bravo on your courage. Also, I wouldn't mind kidnapping you and forcing you to write lyrics for me :mwahaha:

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Heeeey, i appreciate your whole input and feedback on my music! i definetly i am growing and evolving with it. Appreciate your kind lovely words. Sending you blessings.

- Sparta

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Originally Posted by monsa199a

:fro::awesomed::awesomed::tunes:

YEAH MAN!!!

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Cheers mate!