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      4am insanity?

      Typing Typing Typing
      all night
      I won't stop
      until I die
      I'm going to die
      I'm going to die
      that's right.

      I'm comfortably uncomfortable,
      perfactly insane.
      just because I'm alright,
      does not mean I'm ok.

      you can chat with me,
      anytime, anytime,
      but I can't promise you your mind,
      yes I'm still online,
      I haven't stopped typing!


      Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.

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      and im typing with you! yay!
      "i am the crumpled sheets of paper behind an artists' attempt at perfection"


      www.myspace.com/mattnocas (more recent pics and info)
      Pictures of me here-----> (4 years old now)
      http://www.dreamviews.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5073

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      And I'm typing at you. Dodge the exclamation mark armies!
      REGIMENT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
      REGIMENT TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
      REGIMENT POO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
      I MEAN THREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

      That's an intresting (and weird) poem.

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      i like that poem alot Paperdoll...most your poems seem depressing, but this ones happy fun (at least it comes off that way to me)

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      it was supposed to be kindof humourus. I like the way the overall flow of it turned out.


      Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.

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      Its actually pretty good stuff, you have inspired me to post some of my poetry!!!!! Expect it in the future!!!!!!!
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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