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      Deap Poem of life....

      Ricochet

      I am a puppet
      I rise inside the darkness of an supercilious soul
      Desire is my unexpected mistress
      Trapped inside this excrutiation bowl

      Oh why? Destiny defies the very purpose
      Of he who listen to a world that has collapsed
      Insuficient is the love that one has given
      When betrayed by fate in the friendly fire of the past
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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      I'm guessing you meant Deep? Oh the irony. Also, supercilious seems kind of out of place. It doesn't seem to make sense to me but I dunno, maybe I didn't get it.
      And We'll Pray, That There's No God To Punish Us.

      You'll Spend 20 Years Wind Up Alone, Demented.

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      Oh, you got it alright, if there was something to get... Actually I just made it up at the spot, and was laughing my ass off as I did. I tried to make it seem deep, but have it actually mean nothing. I just realized...that can be considered a post-modernist poem; it lack real meaning, thus words mean nothing....

      I think I did a pretty good job!

      P.S. The "deap" part was intentional, thus completing this masterpiece...
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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