Hey, guys. As you might know already, I am an aspiring writer. I thought since I have nothing else better to do today, I should post one of my poems! If you had some serious criticism, I would love to hear it! Here it is..
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Swallowed by the sanctuary
Of my own self-conscienceness,
I could spend my lifetime caught within
The season of
These never ending Saturday mornings
Longing to see the evidence of life's
Contemporary beauty.
Could I study your countenance for an eternity,
Or for just a few years at least?
May I touch your spirit just once,
So that I could
Envision the true happiness
We both lack without one another?
Or is life made of that feeling?
Give me a soft smile and a glance that's everlasting
And I will be the gardener
Of your ever-blooming heart.[/u]