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    1. 03-19-2004 07:08 PM #1
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      My first attempt

      Ok, I just made this up off the top of my head.My first attempt at being poetic.
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      Nothing

      I look around, I see nothing
      I walk forward, standing on nothing
      I try to touch,I feel nothing
      This world is nothing

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      don't laugh please..
      You guys suck.
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    2. 03-19-2004 09:07 PM #2
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      just kidding. i liked it.
      clear eyes. strong hands.
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    3. 03-19-2004 09:11 PM #3
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      you liked it?Holy shit I didn't think I would get a positive response, Considering I had made that up about 2 mins. before I posted it.
      thx adidas.
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    4. 03-20-2004 12:41 AM #4
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      LOL!!!

      Just like your head,
      full of, nothing...



      I like it. But what are you walking 'upon'?
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    5. 03-20-2004 12:46 AM #5
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      how is that? I changed it.
      You guys suck.
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    6. 03-20-2004 12:49 AM #6
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      Better.

      You're missing a comma though... Or is it supposed to be like that?
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