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A Battle of the mind!
COEXISTANCE
No I will not bend to your rules!
---Allow me to indulge today
--- I can't, for the sake of dismay
But the world has so much to offer!
---But, it is peace of mind that I seek
---It is all there. Take it from the week.
For your mind is sure to eventually bend
---Have I not tried to walk a straight line?
---Yes. But take what you can while there is time.
I suggest I take a break from you today.
that is O.K. I am your mind. I won't go away.
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Interesting to say the least...
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Wow that was indeed intresting. I think the rhyming perfectly convinces the reader that it is a person that is talking with his/her own head. It flows nice.
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I thought it was great, highly creative and the rhymes blended in perfectly instead of hindering the message as a whole...
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Nice! Deep and interesting...
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yay, a poem not about love or morbidness lol ;p good stuff
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