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      Another poem. INSIDE A BODY OF GLASS

      Inside a Body of Glass

      I'm on the inside looking at you,
      You don't even believe what you see of me,
      Only so you think I'm alive,
      I've been in my mind,
      I have nothing to hide....,
      They say I'm cured from myself,
      But I can't say I'm over it,
      I can't feel alive if I'm dead inside,
      To many scars to count,
      I wanna sleep so long to forget this all,
      I have dug my own grave and I'm waiting,
      You see I can not be saved,
      I hide in my own complexity,
      I still haven't shedded this pain,
      I'm just tolerating you more,
      Manipualting my way out,
      The only thing I was taught right,
      Can you smell the anger in me?,
      You think you know me?,
      Explain my explainations,
      I'm only here because you believe I am,
      Do you believe that or only wish to?
      Your life and reality....,
      Is it only what you wish to believe?.
      What can you beLIEve???
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      I wrote this after I got home from the hospital. I was comitted for slicing my wrists. More like shredding, gashing and stabbing them. I don't remember it though...Long Story anyways. Just tell me what you think of it. I'll quit posting my poems if you like. just be honest. I have plenty more I can post. Just lemme know. thanks.


      Are we dreaming?

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      Holy shit.
      Amazing, and it really gets you thinking eh?
      don't quit posting your poems.
      They are awesome!
      You guys suck.

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      That, as usual, was awesome...

      Don't stop posting your poems, they truly are amazing and tell a lot about yourself and you view on life

      I also hope you can fight your demons and defeat them....
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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      Quite slicing your wrists! Don't stop writing in the Forum.
      That piece of work reminds me of a person who is ready to explode from the inside, but appears to everyone else to be fine. A person who needs an outlet. Like writing.

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      Quite slicing your wrists! Don't stop writing in the Forum.[/b]
      I AGREE!


      You seem to be able to express you're feelings well in writing. Hope it's enough. Happiness is often overlooked!
      I enjoy reading your work...keep it coming.
      " my dreams they aren't as empty as my conscience seems to be"


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