I like the idea of Artist's Corner
anyway I write poem and please tell me your opinion

Lonely

I was lonely walking through the darkness
I was in sadness
Suddenly
You came and took me to the madness
You light up my ways
Everything's changed
Everything's become so bright
But not too long
Suddenly
You've hurt my feeling badly
You 've gone and left me so cold
Asking my self why?
Even you haven't said goodbye
I'm lonely again cause of you
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chane the life

the stupid girl's gone, the strong one will be come

the mistakes's gone forever ,it's will be wright forever

the tears and sadness will not be anymore,the happyness will be more

the shyness's gone,the curageous's still come

the soft heart's gone, the hard heart will be found

the girl will die, the woman will born

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For you

I still still love you
what's the secret of you
I say i'll leave you...but if i see you i'll run to you
I say i'll be tough with you ..but if i meet you i'll be soft
i like you...i love you...i adore you
your voice is so sweet....when i heart it i forget eveything even if you hurt me
when you talk to me .i remember evey word
when you say bye..i'm sad cause you'll leave me
when you leave ....i want to cry cause i don't know if i'll meet you again
but.................do you love me?
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if there's any mistake about grammer tell me