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Idenity X

Hmmph . I've posted two poems and no one is yet to take any notice[/b]

Sorry that happens when you have that kind of Idenity
I also mistook your saying at the bottom (just a joke......) to be in conjuntion with what you wrote so I was hesitant to reply.
Anyway, What I get out of this one is somthing that I struggle with a lot myself. My brain. But there is a lot of info that I think you could only decifer.
So please do. I would like to know your train of thought on this one!

So is this poem about a lack of self esteem? That's what I get from it.

Good job.

i thought it was awsome.....the line

Originally posted by Identity X+--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Identity X)</div>

Walking on, through fields, through mud, through shit [/b]

was good, i could picture that in my head vividly.....also near the end

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My life an *
insignificant ember *
in an eternal night sky

that was nice as well ey, good work man

catchya

Thanks mate (puts on an awful impersonation of a steareotypical Ramsey Street citizen). I'll post another poem now I'm in the mood.