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      Yes, yes, another poem from me........

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      Are we dreaming?

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      frozen_joth:
      O.K. I'm not impressed with this one. But then again I usually throw away all my poems after I write them. I just typed this one as I sat here. This is my last post here for awhile probaly. I've been crawling back into my hole of numbness. I can't seem to find my will to begin again[/b]
      This quote is in reference to the poem - My Hateful Paralyzed Self - Esteem
      I have noticed some similarities in your poems.
      Why do writers & artists throw their stuff away a lot. I know I do. It is because you are your own biggest critic. When you work on a piece of work you tend to over analyze.
      - be careful of crawling in a hole, they can be hard to get out of sometimes.

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      Great poem! I must admit that I had to read it twice in an attempt to comprehend your meaning and still I am not clear but I suppose that is to be expected. Don't give in to torpidity.
      " my dreams they aren't as empty as my conscience seems to be"


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      yeah Very nice.. Very nice.

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      Hmmph . I've posted two poems and no one is yet to take any notice.

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      Originally posted by Identity X
      Hmmph . I've posted two poems and no one is yet to take any notice.
      (please don't make irrelevant comments like this here. if you're going to say something about his poem, great. if not, please keep it to yourself ok.)


      Joth, I love this poem. I love the words. It's probably my favourite of yours! n _n I'm going to have to stop and think about it though...I never can understand the meanings behind poems at first. ; ; I do think it would look better written a little different, a different form, without a comma being after each line...but other than that, it looks great and I love it. keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your poems soon! *hug*


      Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.

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