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      This is a short poem

      Mirrorless Shadows


      You said it's different and I think it's a laugh behind the mirror,
      Withering whispers that float into my dug open scabs...

      What is it you see to hate in forms of knowing. Bled through the paper and into the skin.
      To Love again you must love yourself, For rage to begin again....

      Faces oddly turn in disgust to something they can't see. A monster grieving for nothing and begging for innocence.

      Doubt you I will in to a painful uphill scale forgotten how to climb I stay fallen at the bottom digging and just waiting.
      Waiting for the shadows to devour my soul and set me free....
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      O.K. so I lied. I just felt like typing after I read the good comments I keep getting. It drives me to write more. Well type actually beacuse I can't crumble up my computer and toss into the trash can. I know this is a short one but I've got things to do for once Thanks again for the comments!


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      I love the imagery I get from your poems.

      I'm curious. where do you get inspiration? n_n


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      Well it's more like a feeling I get. When I get the feeling to write or type a poem I don't even think about it. Kinda go off into a hyptnotic gaze and write until I feel like its finished and then when I'm done I'll read it and just think "This is crappy". lol No but I don't have inspirations or anything. just a feeling to write. I Reconize the thoughts/words/senteces as I write them but don't really realize what i'm writing about until I'm done and then I read it. It's weird and hard to explain. My poems do mean something. After I read them I know what it's about. You can interpet them anyway you like, it's all on how you see it.....If you really would like to know what it's about or anything...., Just ask and I may answer....Anyways, i'm glad people like and enjoy reading them. It makes me feel better. Thanks again


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      I am glad you crawled out of your hole. To much to offer.
      As far as the poem goes - Paperdoll summed it up.

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       I find myself saying that to most of the poems written in The Artist Corner - but am I to blame for there to be so much talent floating around? 
      
      I am not sure if all who have written in The Artists Corner have had a lucid expieriance or not, but I believe it does spawn a persons awareness and if they are into the arts this would therefore spawn creativity. Maybe that is why most of the writings are so damn good. 
      
       
      
      More coming from you Frozenjoth?

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      Thanks Howetzer and Paperdoll! Crawling out of my hole??? No, I haven't yet got back into it. Trying all I can to keep my head up and smiling. Manically some say. I honestly don't think anybody's poems's are bad. I think If the writer or artist likes there work then it is good. I like all poems and art. Just my opinion... Thanks again for the comments. I'm glad to get atleast two replys to my poems lol. I'm trying to become more active in these forums so you might wanna keep an eye out for me...


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