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I am fasinated with the concept of time as of late. So my last three poems reflect that. Sorry if it is getting redundant.
I am rittled how time has went astray.
If one were to ask myself.........
What have you done with the day?
For Lord knows, the doors are few and far between
Where the riches lie and the fortune to be seen
When one beholds among the step behind
there will be no fortune in wich you'll find.
Now I sit here... emotion egasp
For now I realize
the time has gone and past. :|
Nice, I like it. Good rhetoric.
:-P Thanks Squall!!!!!!
I always thought rhetoric was a term for bad but opon looking it up i was wrong. Thanks!
I was hoping for any feedback on that one.
I like this one. It made me step back and think for a second. To me, it makes sense. Good work and keep them comeing! :D
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Originally posted by frozen_joth
I like this one. It made me step back and think for a second. To me, it makes sense. Good work and keep them comeing! *:D
Thanks & ditto to you.