I thought I'd update my art here, since it's awfully hard to get a good critique on deviantART.

It's not the best, I know, but I want to get better. Please don't hesitate to be harsh with any errors you see; mistakes are the best teacher! I'd draw from my dreams, but I still have horrible recall, but I'm workin' on it!

Ok, this: Click Here is a drawing, partly based off of a dream. You decide what it's really about, but artisitic advice would be wonderful. I know it isn't the best, but anything totally wrong jump out at you?

Also, here is the uncolored sketch version: Click Here