although the topic is pretty...over-used, this poem is pretty good, it's got nice rhymes. very catchy. |
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No second chance, |
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Brandon
although the topic is pretty...over-used, this poem is pretty good, it's got nice rhymes. very catchy. |
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Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.
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it's incredible. |
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did you notice how we're all changing?
yet still we are the broken ones.
-naya-
techboy is my daddy!!!
i luff being adopted.
I don't know if you want constructive criticism, if you don't then close your eyes real quick. |
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The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
Adopted by Lomebririon
He means that people ignored that his life was done...as in he commited suicide... |
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If I hadn't made me
I'd be more inclined to bow
Powers that be would have swallowed me up
But that's more than I can allow...
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