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      Upbeat & Happy!!!

      Me being guilty myself, but I have noticed that the poems and writings in the Artist's corner are quite depressing or morbid. If someone were to take a glance for the first time at the Artist's Corner they would hang themselves.
      I for one use it as a release & I know that is most likely why others have written around this format. When you feel somthing Bad it helps to write about it.
      Anyway is there anyone out there who would like to share a nice poem?

      I woke up to glance at the sky.
      the sun! Glaring at me , asking why?

      Today is a new day to make the most of the choices you have!

      Everyone has been delt a hand.
      While some better than others, it is all on where you stand.

      For one can glance and skowel at the sun.
      While another takes his chance for his day has just begun.

      (kind of cheesy but it is out of my nature)

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      Nice poem man and good idea, here's one of my older ones...

      Angel From Above

      The night sky smiled down upon us.
      The sand was clean and warm.
      We lay as waves roll inward.
      Our moment away from the storm.
      As seagulls roam like the king of birds.
      And tree leaves act as if their own.
      This time we lay silent and alone,
      Upon the beach the star light shone.
      On us, on us alone.
      For that breif moment I felt-
      That she was made for me.
      The waves on dry sand pelt-
      Then wake me from this sea;
      A sea ingulfed by utopian love,
      With angels floating o'er.
      She came to me from above-
      The angel I adore.

      From above the thunder broke.
      Rain it showered round.
      Through the clouds did lightning poke-
      Then strike unto the ground.
      Our love it carried us away,
      No need for us to walk.
      Going home, trees they sway,
      From wind and lightning shock.
      And all was calm in this weather.
      I had the girl, so none the better.
      On this tightened rope did teather,
      Waiting for the chains to fetter.
      Break free of all the world.
      And Sink into your love.
      Into the arms of this girl.
      The one sent from above.
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      The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
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      "upbeat..and...happy" sounds like my art teacher.

      "have i got...your........attention? good.......now, today.....we.....will...be...." in her happy, smiley, cheesey voice.

      if this was a synthesized voice you'd go into settings and see

      Pitch Fluctuation:
      [---------------------|]1000000

      Pauses between Random words:
      (*)God, Yeah ( ) No

      Happiness Level:
      [---------------------|]1000000
      [22:59] <Kaniaz> You basically did a massive shit on the rug of this IRC
      [22:59] <Kaniaz> And called it a message

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      Yeah most of my poems can be interpreted as morbid. But the fact is morbid poems are easier to write. A dead body is easier to paint than Mona Lisa. Did a picture of a smiley face win the Turner Prize? No, a sheep disected in half and a car battered with pidgeon shit did. Morbid is easier.

      But I'm a nice guy really

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      yeah, that's a really good point.
      and it's a lot easier to relate to then happyish stuff.
      atleast for me.....
      eh.
      i like morbidness.
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
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      I can be morbid

      Damned

      Lo, to be held in captivation.
      Bound by leathery straps so thick.
      Spoiling my mind for insipration.
      For lack thereof, my death be quick.

      Mine appendages do slowly cease to twitch.
      Their last ounce of feeling pleading in pain.
      A cold, too harsh to bear, blood runs thick.
      All sweet memories torn in vain.

      I die.

      For a moment my soul suspends, reflects.
      A still corpse swinging in defeat.
      Oh, if my being could somehow reject,
      The horror of my earthly retreat...

      To hell.
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      The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
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      ouh, yeah.
      now that's my kinda poetry.
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
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      nice poems in here.....i can see some talent brewing!!!

      the damned poem rocks

      i might make one up now...ere goes

      twisted lane recoils in hammers thunder
      sweat pores erupt around thy living tissue
      smiths mind works, battling kings hunger
      eye reflects skill, blood clots no longer an issue
      the end

      in english this means
      a hammer is striking a metal object, which i signify as twisted lane as the molecules in the metal are like a lane..flowing electrons

      sweat pores erupt are saying that a person is immersed in great effort

      the smith is working the metal, and is battling a death sentance if he gets it wrong, which is the kings hunger....putting people to death
      eye reflects skill is the smith seeing his precision in his work, and blood clots no longer an issue is that the smith wont be put to death....his blood will continue to fow another day

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      That's is some good stuff!!!!!!
      Astounded is right. Angel From Above - awesome. That goes to show all poems do not have to be melencolly. However like myself I only seem to be inspired to write or paint when I am down in the dumps.

      Back to Angel from Above.
      The way you wrote that put me right there in the scene, just as it should.
      The other one was good aswell but I might as well stick to my and stay positive on this post.
      More + anyone?

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      Wow... astounded that second poem was amazing...

      I think you are right about a lack of a happy atmosphere in this forum. But what can you do.

      (I think it\'s all Paperdoll, she started the trend)

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      I was walking down the alley
      going home
      a lady backs out
      looking for her own

      I can tell by her car
      she's sold her soul
      to the man in Detroit
      but who cares, she has to go

      Oh, it's back to Michigan
      I'll leave in a ford
      fix it three times
      it's Michigan, my Lord

      Where it was killed
      before they had a chance
      oh listen to that organ
      Michgan, how 'bout a dance

      It's up in Michigan
      Where we stole the maple tree
      right from Canada
      it's where I want to be

      ---

      just thought it up, whatever . When I read poetry with a bad vibe to it, I just kinda think, "Yeah, that's nice."

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      Originally posted by Xisdence+--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Xisdence)</div>
      the damned poem rocks[/b]
      Thank you!

      <!--QuoteBegin-Howetzer

      That's is some good stuff!!!!!!
      Astounded is right. Angel From Above - awesome. That goes to show all poems do not have to be melencolly. *
      The way you wrote that put me right there in the scene, just as it should.
      Thank you, most of my stuff is positive, but I like to cover all the bases. Check out my latest topic \"Heaven\" it has 3 pieces of prose I did for creative writing class.

      Originally posted by Squall
      Wow... astounded that second poem was amazing...
      You guys really do like the morbid stuff! Thanks man.

      Doug, I don't really understand your poem, kinda lost me.
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      The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
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      all because morbid is what is "hip and cool" these days

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      Yeah, I agree. Why would you waste away your days purposely being morbid?

      OMG!!~ IM MAKIN A DIFFERANCE!!!!11&#96;

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      What is morbid..like sad and depressed.......im seriously close to that tonight...angry frustrated and depresed as ive ever been.....today life sux..sorry guys

      trying to be happy-xisdence
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      err.
      it's not "hip and cool"
      it's just......................bleh.
      i dont like being depressed.
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
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      Originally posted by Xisdence
      What is morbid..like sad and depressed.......im seriously close to that tonight...angry frustrated and depresed as ive ever been.....today life sux..sorry guys
      What is the problem there Xisdence? I know it is easy for someone else to say cheer up. So I won't. But I will use all these corney Emotocons to try & cheer you up! :yumdumdoodledum:

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      Originally posted by Howetzer

      What is the problem there Xisdence? I know it is easy for someone else to say cheer up. So I won't. But I will use all these corney Emotocons to try & cheer you up! * * * * *:yumdumdoodledum: * *
      ahh just something i have to overcome its been on my shoulders for about half a year and getting heavier, but one day ill get over it..thanx for tha emotions mate....ur a good bloke!!!

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