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      Naya's Poetry..eww

      awr.
      basically i have some poetry and i feel like posting it.
      cos i can.
      i'll probably find more soon.
      so yeah.
      here goes:
      Three
      Three people stand before the child
      Lined up all in a row
      She watches them so closely
      About them all to know

      The first one is a woman
      Her long and shiny hair
      Those piercing green eyes watch the child
      In her heart is so much care

      The child looks about the woman
      Taking in all to see
      A woman so full of love and hugs
      Who's there for every plea

      The second is a boy
      His not so shabby attire
      In his arms he's held her tight
      And kept her from the fire

      The child looks above him
      See's his halo shining bright
      To her the boy's an angel
      With him it'll be alright

      The last one is a girl
      10 older than the child
      Her eyes blaze full of fury
      But her heart is always mild

      The child watches her
      14 beyond her years
      A hellish life she lives
      Shedding but so many tears

      These three they mean so much
      One small world to a kid
      And even though they are this much
      For each one thing be rid

      For the woman she rids the trust
      For the boy rids all their ties
      And for the girl she rids the most
      She rids all but her lies

      A criminal child
      A relationship theft
      She's robbed those she loves
      And now no one is left

      No one to hide her from the hold
      Hide her from the heat
      Shield her from the darkness
      Or hold her when she's fallen in defeat

      My Room (Not really a poem)
      this place is safe. i am safe here. nobody goes in or out without my knowledge. it's my haven. i am free here. i can think and do as i please. nobody can stop me. im okay sleeping here. the lulling sound of classical music. the perfect disorder of things. i know every crack and creavous. i thrive here. what was once a prison to me is now where i belong. the panes on the windows may remind me of bars, but aleast they keep things out. everything in here is perfect to me. i love it all. i want to stay here forever. sometimes my lonely fantasies come back. all the old games, old friends. they're all here; dead, but here. somethings change daily in here, but it still looks the same. a changing monotany. a room full of oxymorons. me the most obvious. i drink it all in, an eager child, wanting more. the mirror, the bulletin boards, the dresser, they all scream "NAYA". they are mine. i cherish them. yet somehow i dont want them. another oxymoron, another addition to the lengthy list.

      awr.
      i have to go.
      i have some more that i'll post later.
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
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      i luff being adopted.

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      cool poem and room entry privatexeyes

      the poem seems very deeop and meaningful......i get a picture in my head of wat they look like
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      I agree with Xisdence, they both seem very deep and meaningful. That;s some good stuff you've got there.

      :aphiusisonecrazySOB: Well done!
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      Stalker
      Eyes bore into her back
      Invisible eyes
      Unknown stalkers watched her
      Invisible stalkers
      The heat of eyes upon her back
      The sensation drove her mad
      She longed to turn around
      To see her stalker
      To look upon his face
      The dagger slit her neck suddenly
      She never had a chane to see him
      For the dream ended quickly

      Choice
      Sitting on the floor
      Her back against the door
      Tear come to her eyes
      She cries
      He speaks with anguish in his voice
      "That was a bad choice"
      She shakes her head
      He's filled her with dread
      But she must move on
      Must prove him wrong
      Or loose herself forever
      In his silent world of never

      Fortune Seer
      Her reflection in the glass
      She stood out from the class
      Her green eyes watched it all
      Saw everybody's downfall
      Her books held tightly to her chest
      She only wished to rest
      Her classmates future was seen
      By eyes of a bright green
      Unwillingly she saw
      What was to become of them all

      Boo
      His head comes down hard
      "You are not a retard"
      She shakes her head"
      It's nothing to dread"
      He lifts his head again
      This time will make ten
      She pulls him away
      Puts his head over the tray
      "Please don't"
      "Fine, I won't"
      She hugs him tight
      Her world is right

      Witness
      There once was a little girl
      She was as beautiful as a pearl
      Locked deep inside her was hell
      Though few could tell
      Many loved her, this she didn't know
      She thought herself a stupid hoe
      Things only got worse
      A solemn curse
      Then one day she was gone
      With no witness but the dawn
      Her friends all cried
      But soon their tears dried
      One still did weep
      And cried herself to sleep
      She knew what went wrong
      For she'd witnessed the dawn

      Back
      And then she was back
      But things weren't on track
      They were different now
      Twas amazing how
      Different they were
      This seemed horrible to her
      All relationships torn to a tatter
      But she was back
      The rest didn't matter

      Grey Eyes
      Her silent, sad, grey eyes
      Holding in her cries
      Wishing she could weep
      Inside her feeling she shall keep
      She does things that kill her so
      Of these no one must know
      She is holding in her cries
      But pain shows in her grey eyes

      Murderer
      A mocking grin upon his face
      His wicked eyes sweep the place
      Tracing her cheek with his hand
      Laughing along with his outlaw band
      Branding the women he claims to love
      Then waltzing away with the grace of a dove
      How could a murderess man be so free?
      Something the authorities couldn't see
      On every woman he left his mark
      Then walked away, into the dark

      Senses
      I see the broken faces
      Their eyes crying out for help
      Stuck in censored places

      I hear the screams
      Their eyes full of fear
      There's nothing but broken dreams

      I smell the dispare
      Their eyes show so much pain
      Each day forms another tear

      I wish I could somehow touch the lives of hell
      Their eyes reflecting the flames
      I want to pick up those who've fell

      I taste the bitter smog
      Their eyes are searching for light
      Watch the rolling fog

      I feel the lingering pain
      Their eyes all blend together
      On the world forever a stain
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
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      i luff being adopted.

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      hey privatexeyes, i read some of your last entries,,,,,thought they were some good talent!!!

      i liked the Witness one the most, the ending is unsettling...it moved me a little...

      also Choice was awsome........it reminds me of a nightmare or choice that one doesnt want to make....

      i guess there are hidden messages ins ome of these entries...but i think they rok....

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      thanks..
      yeah.
      i usually write my poetry about stuff that's happened to me.
      Choice always gets me..

      I Love You
      sometimes i wonder
      why do you care?
      all i do is push you away
      i tell you im fine
      tell you i dont need help
      but you're always here
      you open doors, and hold me
      i love you, i swear that i do
      it's just that...
      im scared
      ive been hurt so much and im catutious
      but you're so true
      i think i'll open up
      and show you my full potential

      that was kinda a break through poem for me..it helped me realise some stuff.
      i have one that im working on right now..i'll post it when it gets finished.
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
      techboy is my daddy!!!
      i luff being adopted.

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      Well done, privatexeyes!
      [22:59] <Kaniaz> You basically did a massive shit on the rug of this IRC
      [22:59] <Kaniaz> And called it a message

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      I THOUGHT "THREE" WAS MARVELOUS!!!!
      " my dreams they aren't as empty as my conscience seems to be"


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