Feedback

[Howie]

In the Artist Corner wether or not anyone would admit it. I believe feed back from the members is very important. Squall, HalmaH,Paperdoll, & Truthbearer just to name a few, have consistantly prompted their adivce in this forum. to you guys who pay it foward. And for everyones sake don't be afraid to post your work because you think it sucks. Most artist do.

[Truthbearer]

I concur, we are all intelligent people and critical as well. It's a small community, feel comfortable, you are among friends....

[Howie]

Originally posted by Truthbearer I concur, we are all intelligent people and critical as well. It's a small community, feel comfortable, you are among friends.... You heard the man. He bears the truth! And being critical is a good thing. It helps you to improve. So If your writing is cratiquged in such a way you do not like don't crawl under a table. Think over the advice and decide wether it holds merit or not and if it does head the advice. Same goes for Lucid Dreaming. Just because someone says this or that will work I say Question everything!!!!!

[KalmaH]

Was it you who said you are your own worst critic ??? So true... so freakin' true...

[Howie]

Originally posted by KalmaH Was it you who said you are your own worst critic ??? So true... so freakin' true... Yes it was. Your last poem, Heaven Bleeds It is funny. I thought that your phrase: "Angels surround me every day of my life, not to protect me, but to keep the demons from ecscaping." Was part of your poem. It reads quite well with. (It doesn't have to ryme).

[KalmaH]

Originally posted by Howetzer+--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Howetzer)</div> <!--QuoteBegin-KalmaH Was it you who said you are your own worst critic ??? So true... so freakin' true... Yes it was. Your last poem, Heaven Bleeds It is funny. I thought that your phrase: \"Angels surround me every day of my life, not to protect me, but to keep the demons from ecscaping.\" Was part of your poem. It reads quite well with. (It doesn't have to ryme).[/b] Thanks man... actually it kind of is. This is the third installment in a little of series I have. The other two are the base for this one... but I am my own worst critic and I think they suck. My sig is part of the second one. Rhyming is usually not my style either, I'm only using it for this series. I think this last one turned up well so that's why I decided to post it.