"Heaven" 3 pieces of prose....
These were written last semester as a creative writing assignment. I was to write three different depections of what I think heaven may be like. Here you go... comments and constructive criticism appreciated!
Heaven A
You will wake up
in the arms of an angel
pressed tightly against
her bosom.
Her body is sublimely soft
and perfectly warm.
Her silky hair smells sweet
and rests gently in the small
of her collarbone,
Her hands roam your body
and send ecstasy riveting
through you like
orgasmic lightning.
She seems to know
everything you want;
where to move,
when to moan,
when to scream.
Time does not exist
along with worry,
pain, fear or hunger.
You do not tire or hesitate.
You do not stop.
Heaven B
You will wake up
in another world.
Thousands of wondrous
creatures lives and breathes
around you.
Some of them
are made of light,
they dance in patterns
that excite and mesmerize
your beyond perfect vision.
You will taste the fruits
of this new world
and with each bite
the scenery manipulates
around you and grows
more beautiful.
You will eventually find
the fruit of life and
this magnificent world
you are in
will then become your own
to control, create, and modify.
The images you desire and creatures
you imagine spring to life,
each one emitting streams
of ecstasy
through your eyes,
through your mind
and they will surge through
your body with a feeling
or pure bliss never
experienced by any other being.
It is your creation of nirvana.
Heaven C
You will wake up alone
in a sphere of brilliant white light.
First she will appear
in a soft mist,
searching your mind
for everything you love,
everything that turns you on.
She is molded
from a culmination of all
that you find beautiful.
The white sphere around you
then transforms into darkness
illuminated by specs of
light that dramatically dance
for your eyes and hers.
You embrace your heavenly
lover for the first time
with a simple kiss.
A feeling of joy jumps from
her lips
to yours.
Ecstasy slips from her
tongue as it swirls about yours.
The lights intensify and
begin to spiral about you
in a frenzy of pure passion.
As you think you are about to climax
the specs of light suddenly
merge with your body.
You will then become
an everlasting feeling of bliss
by the side of your lover,
all that is beautiful.