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      Forgotten War (poem)

      Forgotten War

      Another breath, not one in vane,
      Thoughtless mind, not one insane,
      Feel the cold, the blanket of black,
      Feeling of love, the one I lack,

      This Holy war, quickly covered up,
      By our government, that’s oh so corrupt,
      Still we pray, in times of trouble,
      We give a hand, out of the rubble,

      To them we exist, only under the covers,
      Yet they teach us, to love our brothers?
      Why do we listen? Why do we try?
      When we were born to live,
      And we live to die…
      Brandon

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      o.O
      very nice.
      i likes it.
      seems to fit what's going on around, eh?
      i guess that's the point...
      did you notice how we're all changing?
      yet still we are the broken ones.
      -naya-
      techboy is my daddy!!!
      i luff being adopted.

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      last two lines are the shiznittle bam snip snap...
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      The dream is real, my friends. The failure to realize it is the only unreality.
      Adopted by Lomebririon

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      good poem, although i dont agree with what its saying (which is 50%+ of liking any given poem)

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      DAMN!!!! I almost confused you with Kaniaz, and then thought "Oh no, he's trying to be funny changing his sex too..." It was then I realized the awfulness of the truth...

      I specially liked the last to lines of the poem, not only the content but the way you made it rhyme too...
      If I hadn't made me
      I'd be more inclined to bow
      Powers that be would have swallowed me up
      But that's more than I can allow...

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