Pure Joy;)

..walking barefoot on the grass..
..sitting mindless in the dawn..
..waching stars..drinking tea
..what a great thing is simply be")P

thats not very smart..but who cares")



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thats pure joy too")

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Originally Posted by ugne

..walking barefoot on the grass..
..sitting mindless in the dawn..
..waching stars..drinking tea
..what a great thing is simply be")P

thats not very smart..but who cares")
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There is no standard of IQ to make it cool.
It is simple and quite fulfilling.
Silence, quite.
A quite mind can be disturbed by a thought like a candle can be blown out by a breeze.

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Originally Posted by Howetzer

There is no standard of IQ to make it cool.
It is simple and quite fulfilling.
Silence, quite.
A quite mind can be disturbed by a thought like a candle can be blown out by a breeze.
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Pretty darn nice, there.

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Originally Posted by ugne

..walking barefoot on the grass..
..sitting mindless in the dawn..
..waching stars..drinking tea
..what a great thing is simply be")P

thats not very smart..but who cares")
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I like it a lot, :bowdown: but how about change the last line to:
..what a great thing is it to be

because that would go smoother if you sing it, and I think your words are about "simply being", so there is no need to actualy add "simply" because the rest of the words say that already

just an idea, i could be completly wrong :oops:

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Originally Posted by dodobird

I like it a lot, :bowdown: but how about change the last line to:
..what a great thing is it to be

because that would go smoother if you sing it, and I think your words are about "simply being", so there is no need to actualy add "simply" because the rest of the words say that already

just an idea, i could be completly wrong :oops:
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thanks")

sure please..you can take them"))..its no poetry..just wrote this from my tongue"))