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      Poem I wrote.

      ou'll rupture the soul with words (I am told),
      You'll surely scare them away!
      For the depths of your heart will tear them apart,
      If you let such words fly,
      With every message you try to make.
      But those depths(I replied),
      Are the portal to the maddening end of days;
      So if (I implied),

      This is called the poet's discussion. Am I a worthy poet yet? I am 16, and have been reading and writing my whole life.

      The poet's discussion

      They would want to survive,
      They would happily go on their way.
      (He says) Frequent fearlessness,
      And the moral Renaissance has surely taken your view!
      Be not afrighted-
      More like delighted-that such things have a'stolen your heart anew!
      And if (He inquired),
      You keep all this up,
      You'll capture their mind's eye-and revive
      The curiousness in those poor lonely souls
      (Truly Inspired) Their hearts will surely thrive
      Poetry,(he hath said to me),is the beauty of the human race-
      Romance and ridicule,
      Fire and water.
      We inhale, and live, and in our very souls embrace!
      Shine on, you crazy diamond!

      Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte

      Adopted: MarcusoftheNight

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      Crap...i messed that poem all up....Here it is really


      You'll rupture the soul with words (I am told),
      You'll surely scare them away!
      For the depths of your heart will tear them apart,
      If you let such words fly,
      With every message you try to make.
      But those depths(I replied),
      Are the portal to the maddening end of days;
      So if (I implied),
      They would want to survive,
      They would happily go on their way.
      (He says) Frequent fearlessness,
      And the moral Renaissance has surely taken your view!
      Be not afrighted-
      More like delighted-that such things have a'stolen your heart anew!
      And if (He inquired),
      You keep all this up,
      You'll capture their mind's eye-and revive
      The curiousness in those poor lonely souls
      (Truly Inspired) Their hearts will surely thrive
      Poetry,(he hath said to me),is the beauty of the human race-
      Romance and ridicule,
      Fire and water.
      We inhale, and live, and in our very souls embrace!
      Shine on, you crazy diamond!

      Raised: The Blue Meanie, Exobyte

      Adopted: MarcusoftheNight

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      Wow,I like it a lot, nice job!

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      My poem is Roses are red Violets are blue god made me look good and WTF did he do to you
      Still Dreaming...

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      You took the word right out of my mouth

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      I can tell that you have more right brain power than me.
      I wuv-Scwigglie

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