I hate happy endings... but that's me. |
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A'hoy hoy, |
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I hate happy endings... but that's me. |
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Early Morning Moment,
A Glimpse of Joy,
But soon it's Over, and I return to Dust...
As the poem shifted from the darker side to the lighter side I noticed that some of the negetive issues were not addressed on the happy side. Not like you have to. There are really know rules. To actually account one good thing for every bad thing is not what I mean either. I think the first half of the poem was written vivid enough to draw you in and then when the change accurs, it seems to happen too quickly. A very descriptive beginning and BOOM! The next thing you know the poem is over and you smell the roses. |
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I like it, the sun makes me happy |
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It gave me a bad dream. And it wasn't lucid it was extremely freakish |
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i like it...i mean, other than the happy ending...its a backwards twist...thats why it feels wierd...think about it, generally a twist in the story goes down...maybe left or right...but never up...but this story twists up, which is odd...cause we're all awaiting that last complication or negative thing, and he deosnt give it to us...its almost like one last unsaid thing to be said about humans isnt it? we're looking for the negative, and when its missing it feels wrong...hah...very nice |
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Why would the writer do that. No one would like it. |
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Personally, I like to see the bright side of things, so it was relieving to see a positive part to that poem. |
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"Ah, but therin lies the paradox." - Joseph_Stalin
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Dude, that was the freaking SuXXor, don't quit your day job! |
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You guys suck.
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clear eyes. strong hands.
man ur smart. |
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BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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