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      Nonsense Room

      This is not finished, not by a long shot, but it's all I have so far.

      In an imaginary room beyond all imagination, incomprehensible for the human mind to comprehend, there existed an existance existing in this imaginary room beyond all imagination, incomprehensible for the human mind to comprehend. This existance exists as "Fred" and Fred exists as the existance in which the story revolving around the existance existing as "Fred" revolves around.

      Fred stood up and to his amazement, he stood up. Almost by instinct, a voice bellowed from a lady named "Esmerelda" saying, "Sit down." Obediently, Fred stood up and without realizing it, he stood up. Mark and Dorothy ran through the room and knocked over the T.V. Suddenly, Fred stood up and with incredible speed, he stood up! A door flew open and Mark and Dorothy ran through the room and clumsily knocked over the T.V.

      Esmerelda calmly said, "Sit down." Brad carefully picked the T.V. off the table and placed it on the floor. With an empty feeling in his stomach, Fred stood up and with a great sense of belonging, he stood up. Brad quickly picked the T.V. off the wooden table and placed it angrily on the floor.

      Esmerelda shouted at the top of her lungs, "Sit down!" Chasing eachother, Mark and Dorothy glided through the room and unknowingly knocked over the T.V. With a heavy sigh, Fred stood up and looking around the room, he stood up. Out of nowhere, Mark and Dorothy crashed through the room and uncaringly knocked over the T.V. Brad, longing for a friend, gently picked the T.V. off the table and placed it on the carpeted floor. With a great struggle, Fred stood up and knocking over the T.V., he stood up.

      Overcome with anger, Esmerelda whispered, "Sit down." Bobby walked by the window and peered inside at the T.V. An idea popping in his head, Fred stood up and punching the air, he stood up. Laughing wildly, Mark and Dorothy sprinted through the room and with an effort, knocked over the T.V. Coughing uncontrollably, Brad picked the T.V. off the shiny table and sweating, placed it on the floor. Susan, now wiping her mouth, fell to the ground and wiped her mouth.

      Speaking to herself, Esmeralda mouthed, "Sit down." After a long day's work, Fred stood up and seeing his lap disappear, he stood up. Susan, reading a book, fell to the ground and read a book. Bobby walked by the window with his eyes closed and peered inside at the old T.V. With a heavy heart, Brad slowely picked the T.V. off the wobbily table and, with a sigh, placed it on the ground. Hating himself, Fred stood up and wishing he was a better person, he stood up. With a dance in their step, Mark and Dorothy hopped through the room and sticking their tongues out, knocked over the T.V.

      Sounding very tired, Esmerelda lazily said, "Sit down." Mark and Dorothy clumsily stumbed through the room and with precise precision, knocked over the T.V. With a belt in his hand, Fred stood up and with an eager gleam in his eyes, he stood up. Chuck heard the T.V. fall and falling out of his chair, he placed it on the table in the middle of the room.


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      This, of course, doesn't make sense, but I find it artistic in some strange way.

      It seems almost poetic.

      Tell me, is this just the name of the topic? Should I post something nonsensical, or was that peice titled "Nonsense Room". Please enlighten me.

      Either way, repetitive, nonsensical, and confusing, but interesting!
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      Yes, the title of the story was just "Nonsense Room". I've written a few stories that actually do make sense...well sort of. But they are more serious...sort of. They follow a storyline. There. This was just one where I had an idea for a silly story where things could keep happening that already happened.


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