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    1. 10-08-2007 10:39 PM #1
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      A Poem by Xei

      The Night Flyer

      Pitch jet black;
      pitch jet back.


      Like it?
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    2. 10-08-2007 11:11 PM #2
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      I do like it. I can't pull anything from it, but I like it. Poems don't have to be long and complicated to be good.

      I hope there's a meaning behind it?


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
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    3. 10-08-2007 11:19 PM #3
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      Just an elegant pun. I really liked the way it sounds and the whole atmosphere you get from just those six coincedental words in the English language. I'm very proud of it.
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