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Poem of my life
Am I not the same?
Am I so different?
Do I not have feelings?
Do I not breathe the same air?
Am I not innocent?
Then how did I come this far?
Why wont you help me?
Why do you run away from me?
Am I really that different?
Dont you even know who I am?
Where is this pain that you speak?
And why cant I cry?
Where are my emotions?
Am I a MONSTER?
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Can't say I don't feel the same way brother :) Strength in numbers
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Of course not. I'm alone in this world. The poem means I'm too different from everyone else and its my flaw that devides me from the rest of the world.
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Would you ever talk about this 'flaw'?
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This flaw is something that I myself dont even understand. Like I've been pounded in this situation or forced to live this way of life. Maybe for a purpose that hasn't happened yet and will in the future. Like I'm being trained or prepared for the future, but I myself fall and fail to conquer my trials. But who am I, I am no one of great importance.
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Well, just remember there's no shame in being You. Life's not a game of success/failure. It's all in your own mind how successful you are. There are people living in secluded tribes in Africa who are happier than America's richest, best-looking people. Material happiness is an illusion. Please PM me if you'd like to talk about anything. Is the flaw something you could use help understanding?
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sounds a lil like a shakespierian rip off "if you cut me will i not bleed?" etc... a lil to cleyshay for me
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No my poem is more of direct questions, what your saying is more of a cause and effect thing.
And thanks Awaken, but I like to keep everything to myself. I dont think anyone can uderstand this road that I'm walking through.
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Alrighty, your mind knows what you need...Hope you can find yourself :)
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