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    1. 07-07-2004 02:44 AM #1
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      Poem of my life

      Am I not the same?
      Am I so different?
      Do I not have feelings?
      Do I not breathe the same air?
      Am I not innocent?
      Then how did I come this far?
      Why wont you help me?
      Why do you run away from me?
      Am I really that different?
      Dont you even know who I am?
      Where is this pain that you speak?
      And why cant I cry?
      Where are my emotions?
      Am I a MONSTER?
      When I dream, theres always a
      little girl playing in the dirt, that
      turns to me and says "Why are
      you here? .... Are you blind like
      me?"

      What I've found
      What I've known
      Never shined to me what I've shown
      Never be
      Never free
      I wish to see what might have been...
      ...So I talk to you unbeliever.

      I walk in the rain. 1111
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    2. 07-09-2004 05:53 AM #2
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      Can't say I don't feel the same way brother Strength in numbers
      In this crazy world if they don't consider you mad, then you have no confirmation of your own sanity, do you?
      Imagine if this crazy world thought you were sane?! Oh my God, worst nightmare!
      -David Icke
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    3. 07-11-2004 02:41 AM #3
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      Of course not. I'm alone in this world. The poem means I'm too different from everyone else and its my flaw that devides me from the rest of the world.
      When I dream, theres always a
      little girl playing in the dirt, that
      turns to me and says "Why are
      you here? .... Are you blind like
      me?"

      What I've found
      What I've known
      Never shined to me what I've shown
      Never be
      Never free
      I wish to see what might have been...
      ...So I talk to you unbeliever.

      I walk in the rain. 1111
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    4. 07-11-2004 03:20 AM #4
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      Would you ever talk about this 'flaw'?
      In this crazy world if they don't consider you mad, then you have no confirmation of your own sanity, do you?
      Imagine if this crazy world thought you were sane?! Oh my God, worst nightmare!
      -David Icke
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    5. 07-11-2004 04:20 PM #5
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      This flaw is something that I myself dont even understand. Like I've been pounded in this situation or forced to live this way of life. Maybe for a purpose that hasn't happened yet and will in the future. Like I'm being trained or prepared for the future, but I myself fall and fail to conquer my trials. But who am I, I am no one of great importance.
      When I dream, theres always a
      little girl playing in the dirt, that
      turns to me and says "Why are
      you here? .... Are you blind like
      me?"

      What I've found
      What I've known
      Never shined to me what I've shown
      Never be
      Never free
      I wish to see what might have been...
      ...So I talk to you unbeliever.

      I walk in the rain. 1111
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    6. 07-11-2004 05:45 PM #6
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      Well, just remember there's no shame in being You. Life's not a game of success/failure. It's all in your own mind how successful you are. There are people living in secluded tribes in Africa who are happier than America's richest, best-looking people. Material happiness is an illusion. Please PM me if you'd like to talk about anything. Is the flaw something you could use help understanding?
      In this crazy world if they don't consider you mad, then you have no confirmation of your own sanity, do you?
      Imagine if this crazy world thought you were sane?! Oh my God, worst nightmare!
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    7. 07-12-2004 12:46 AM #7
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      sounds a lil like a shakespierian rip off "if you cut me will i not bleed?" etc... a lil to cleyshay for me

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    8. 07-12-2004 01:10 AM #8
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      No my poem is more of direct questions, what your saying is more of a cause and effect thing.

      And thanks Awaken, but I like to keep everything to myself. I dont think anyone can uderstand this road that I'm walking through.
      When I dream, theres always a
      little girl playing in the dirt, that
      turns to me and says "Why are
      you here? .... Are you blind like
      me?"

      What I've found
      What I've known
      Never shined to me what I've shown
      Never be
      Never free
      I wish to see what might have been...
      ...So I talk to you unbeliever.

      I walk in the rain. 1111
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    9. 07-12-2004 05:10 AM #9
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      Alrighty, your mind knows what you need...Hope you can find yourself
      In this crazy world if they don't consider you mad, then you have no confirmation of your own sanity, do you?
      Imagine if this crazy world thought you were sane?! Oh my God, worst nightmare!
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    10. 07-13-2004 12:52 AM #10
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      Everybody has problems.
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