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      The letters wrote... from love to suicide

      love... the roller coaster of emotion...
      the exstacy of life.... the high is great.... but we eventauly come down from that high
      and for some...
      it kills.
      this is the chronical of such an event told from the perspective of the male

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      the story starts out like all the rest.... boy meets girl, boy flirts with girl...
      boy gets girl to laugh... girl and boy fall for one another...
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      part one

      THE LOVE.

      there are no words to tell you what you make me feel,
      its as if you control my very will,

      my every desire, my greatest wishes, still even my worst fears lay in your hands,

      my desires for you that burn inside me making me long for you more,
      making my chest heavey and my heart soar,

      craving the sweet taste of your lips as i rest my hands on your sexy hips,
      feeling your body so close to mine making our hands intertwine,

      the burning for you i feel is out of control,
      beating so hard against my soul,

      your mind your body your heart your soul these seem to be all that can make me whole,

      all i wish for is for you to be mine,
      i am already yours becouse you make my life seem so devine,

      last there are my fears
      scared that i will lose you,

      afraid you will never be mine,
      and terrified your feelings for me will fade

      im giving you the key to my heart and it only beats for you
      please dont break it


      love always&forever

      Josh
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      girl blush, and smiles as she reads the letter... there relationship grows
      the 2 become close...mentaly and pysicaly
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      part 2

      the lust

      i love this girl with all my heart
      and when we touch it's the greatist art
      her hands slide into mine
      we move closer feeling them intertwine
      melodys of love dancen through my head
      as i think of all the words she has said
      she slides her hands around my waist
      feeling my mouth water thinking of her arousing taste
      i rest my hands upon her hips
      getting impatient now looking down at her sexy wet lips
      my heart beating faster as our bodys pull closer
      her full erotic breasts pressing against my chest
      my hands slide down her ass, exploring all over
      i pull her in tighter
      my bodys hunger, so plain to see
      she raises her eyes looking into mine
      she knows what she does to me
      she knows what im thinking
      she knows my love
      she knows my want
      she pulls me in
      i lean closer
      our eyes close softly
      her lips carress mine
      .........everything else fades away..................................

      yours... Josh
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      many things happen withen the time between these 2 poems
      relationships get rocky...
      loyalty weakins.. passion begins to die... the spark is all but gone...
      the hearts that once knew they would be together forever...
      were infact ripped apart from one another
      for whatever petty reason
      but this is the final result.
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      the pain will not subside
      like 2 planes as they collide
      the darkness is all i see now
      as if my souls been taken from me but how?
      the love i felt for her
      now seems like such a blurr
      all i feel now are the shadered broken pieces
      and my heart giving away while the pain increases
      i trusted i loved her but nothing seems to matter now
      so fuck the world im waiting for this gun to go pow
      the blood will run down my face
      already feeling my heart pace
      trusted her loved her gave her all i had
      now im simply raving mad

      yours always...
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      the story ends... the boy gripping his last blood stained letter in his hand
      love is a powerfull emotion.
      dont let it consume you.
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      By Josh Hawkins





      (please excuse the grammer and spelling errors)

      please feel free to post your oppinions and thoughts...

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      Re: The letters wrote... from love to suicide

      Originally posted by insanejester
      love is a powerfull emotion.
      dont let it consume you.
      I don't know.....maybe, let it?

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      wiser words have yet to be spoken... *
      \"stop playing with your dick and pay more attention man!\"~OpheliaBlue) [/b]
      Did you write that Opheliablue? You no guys too well & you sure do not beat around the bush.

      The poem.
      I think it mingled with real life emotions and the progression at which they decend. I felt like I went though a relationship as i was done reading. If that was what you were portraying , you were wright on.

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      Originally posted by Howetzer
      wiser words have yet to be spoken... *
      \"stop playing with your dick and pay more attention man!\"~OpheliaBlue)
      Did you write that Opheliablue? You no guys too well & you sure do not beat around the bush.[/b]
      I plead the 5th.

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