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      Lurker Lynsey's Avatar
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      A not very cheery poem by me!

      Myself

      dark circles are
      evidence of my late nights
      and my dreaming

      the endless staring
      at myself
      to love the things she hates

      the way I bravely listen
      to the song he gave me
      those many minutes ago
      when we once were
      and the way it only
      reminds me of myself

      content that he has
      not yet packed his things
      because I am in his head

      keeping him awake
      the way I keep myself

      I revel in his pain
      faultless that he did not
      love me enough

      not hungry or hot
      or cold

      awake at dawn
      only because I am

      yet to sleep

      realising
      no one can steal me
      from myself

      By Lynsey


      I am normally quite a cheery person, by the way!
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      me likes

      ....pretty ok pessimism from an optimist.... the guy sounds like he wasnt good enough for u... and the chic sounds like a bitch

      Truth, Peace, Love, Revolution, and Unity
      -Raised by OpheliaBlue-

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      I love it!
      Great ending. After all, it is ourselves that we can ultimatly count on.

      Why do I like depressing works??????????

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      Thanks for your comments! There's more where that came from on my website http://www.wordless.co.uk if you wanna take a look!

      Lynsey
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