AmazeO XD's Original Song on Youtube

Heres the link to my song sung by me... Heres the lyrics...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6E2U_MRkuoU

Snow, Rain, Clear, Summertime

Snow,
Snow,
Rain,
Rain,
Clear as day,
oh in the summertime.

Snow- Its so cold,
Rain- I see,
Clear as day- the sun
oh in the summertime.
Snow,
Snow,
Rain,
Rain,
Clear as day,
oh in the

Snow, Snow
Rain, Rain,
Clear as day,
oh in the summertime

Snow- the angels,
Rain- They fall down,
Clear as day- I love you,
In the summertime.
Snow- It's so cold,
Rain-I see,
Clear as day- the sun,
in the summertime.

(slowly quietly)
Snow...snow,
Rain... rain,
Clear as day,
in the summertime.
Snow...snow,
rain....rain.
Clear as day...
in the summertime

Snow, Snow, (Can you hear me?)
Rain, Rain,
Clear as Day,
In the summertime (Negative.)
Snow, Snow,
Rain, Rain,
Clear as Day,
In the summertime.
Snow, Snow, (Who are we?)
Rain, Rain,
Clear as Day,
In the summertime,
and the wintertime.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6E2U_MRkuoU

ENjoy.

Aww!! :smitten: It's so good to hear a DV member's voice.

I liked the song overall. I thought it was a bit chaotic in places, and I think that your guys' voices need to be worked on a bit. They're great voices if you're playing in a band, but acappella requires something more finely tuned, more professional.

I hope you didn't mind some constructive criticism there. :) Anyway, I really enjoyed listening to that, and your chatter in the beginning made me laugh.

Lulz. It was all one person... :)

That was all me hun.

Anyways, Yeah.. it was deff chaotic. I just recorded over and over, so in order for it to be 100% on time I had to record it 100% on the beat. It got a little silly because I was improvising.

But yeah.. one one person, just with several tracks.

Btw, I don't do accappella. I just did that for lack of piano.

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Originally Posted by AmazeO XD

Lulz. It was all one person... :)

That was all me hun.

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What? :eek: That was all you? Wow fantastic job man.

And also think you're next one shoul be longer, as I've told you. Nice voice. ;)

:o That was all one person?? AHHH COOOL!!! :D

Still needs work though. :)

haha. I whipped up that song in a few minutes. Gimme a break here.

Well done, the lyrics sounds pretty decent when sung. Given more time i would be right in assuming you could come up with a more put together and structured version? But yeah, the lyrics sounds fine! Good Job :)

haha. yeah I threw it together in about 10 minutes. That explains the lulzy lack of structure

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Originally Posted by AmazeO XD

haha. yeah I threw it together in about 10 minutes. That explains the lulzy lack of structure

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10 minutes? Thats pretty fast to make it for one person. Thats pretty good man.

Heres another one...

Sugar Roses

Ooo.. you taste like honey,
you taste so fine,
you tast like sugar,
you're all mine.

You taste like sugar,
your smile it gleams
you in my head,
your in my dreams.

Sugar roses honey doses
of my the sweetest heart,
sugar roses honey doses,
of love all in my heart.

Oo... you smell like roses,
you are sublime,
You make me smile,
all the time.
You take my breath,
sweep it away,
I wish i could be with you,
everyday.

Keep in mind I did this in five minutes. The beat is wack, my singing sucks, and I have morning 'cant sing' syndrome. Haha.. enjoy though.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYmTzf89jCo