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      Thpppppphrt!!!

      I never write ANYTHING down, so most of this is from memory...the rest is crap...Yeah, good title then:


      Some from memory, the rest from my anus
      ~ by Ophelia the Blue


      First Meeting
      A Connecting
      Then no eating

      Juxtaposing

      Submission
      Calculation
      Rehabilitation?

      Then to

      Cry
      To Sigh
      And Shoulder a “good bye”

      Followed by

      Eating
      Another Meeting
      Ego beating

      To be

      Reunited
      And Abided
      As souls collided

      Before

      Separation
      Alienation
      Realization

      That a

      Savior
      Was never
      Your Behavior


      (To quote Benedick from Shakespeare’s Much Ado about Nothing:
      “…no, I was not born under a rhyming planet…”)



      Yet, can I NOT “woo under festival terms”? *
      I think perhaps I CAN!
      For I was not born under a rhyming Moon even, or a rhyming fallen star!

      For even a star that has fallen is no more than a meteor,
      Which has crashed into the Earth as those Tempests do aggravate the air –
      No less grand than “Gods” bewitching our hearts and minds.

      Yet I can still take words, and put them to some use,
      No more that a God, and yet no less that a meteor.
      For only a metaphysical love could be ascribed to thee as such:

      A heart, a mind, a soul combined.
      “Inter-assurèd of the mind”. **
      Whilst “winged Cupid is painted blind”?! ***

      So I rationalize
      Your pretended lies
      Which only disguise
      Your fear of _____________________ .

      "lies, surprise, comprimise"??? FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



      * Much Ado about Nothing, William Shakespeare
      ** A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning, John Donne
      *** A Mid-Summer Night's Dream, William Shakespeare

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      Separation *
      Alienation *
      Realization *

      That a *

      Savior *
      Was never *
      Your Behavior [/b]
      Deep !
      Not that I'm exactly the poem guru

      No less grand than “Gods” bewitching our hearts and minds.[/b]
      Even deeper! Love it
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      huh?

      I don't get it...

      (Note to Kids: Don't do pot!... it not only inhibits memory but also concitration and comprehension...)

      sounds good though ophilia

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      Re: huh?

      Originally posted by insanejester
      I don't get it...
      I'm not sure I could explain it anyway, I was drunk when I wrote it. I'm sure it made sense at the time. But the part about the "Tempests", that's sorta like the "summer storm" section in CRAZY WORLD. While tempests ARE disturbing, they're necessary.

      I guess .

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      I understand.

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