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      White Rose Dreaming

      parts of it are missing because i gave the finished poem to a girl in the hostpital so all i have are the notes...
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      White Rose dreaming in apathy's wake
      helpless by nature of life's greedy rake
      (investing in feelings, a fatal mistake)


      the newest sensations burn quickly within,
      as tall as the lies of a beautiful sin
      young hearts are a hapless but curious ken
      (a marvelous riddle without which we'd end)

      a perfectly paradoxed picture is lost
      when none has a hole in the pocket of frost

      demanding the answers sees questions demise
      a piece of the puzzle is dying with tries
      (and never is waiting with truth and with lies)

      made from the ashes of hell's deepest pit,
      the joker is guilty of throwing up spit.

      so this is a promise,
      a rainbow of trial,
      and the trap is as sturdy as one's own denial.


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      _______

      blind without reason
      and guilty of fear,
      the masses of lies
      are afraid of the queer

      the fringes of fate
      are the fingers of hate
      and the snapping of promises
      tainted with rape.

      sleeping with maggots on into the night,
      so frightens the people addicted to light.

      we're taught to see god's eyes
      in shameful disguise,
      and never consider the

      F a t h e r
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      L i e s.
      Last edited by nerve; 03-10-2008 at 07:52 PM.


      Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.

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      i think your poem is absolutely brilliant!!!!! i wish i could write as skillfully as you can. I'll post you a poem i've written sometime, and you can help see where i need my improvements, its a sonnet, i did try.

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