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      Kisses With Razorblades

      Soft delicate embraces, I loathe or love
      Weeping, seeping and over all bleeding
      Touch me once or twice, burning across my wrists
      Sliver, swift gentle lips
      The sensations of incandescent kisses
      Kissing my blood away yet making more drain out
      Donít go, donít leave me here
      I want more now, you canít leave me waiting
      The scars will remind me of the warming feelings of what I want
      The wanting, wanting of your cold metallic lips
      But my memory will always remember the days I hadÖ
      Kisses with razorblades
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      You have a very nice writing style, but I didn't quite get this one..What is the stimulus?What does it mean?
      You guys suck.

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      Sounds like a poetic tale of a masicist. I liked it. VEry well written.
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      cool, i like it, and again good lines to a song...
      the one the only evil bastard

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      Originally posted by ffx&#045;dreamz
      You have a very nice writing style, but I didn't quite get this one..What is the stimulus?What does it mean?
      if you don't get it then i feel no reason to explain it.

      and thank you for al the comments
      Raised by:ffx-dreamz

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