good shit, needs more. |
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Vampires in the night |
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good shit, needs more. |
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R.I.P.
Illidan Stormrage, Grom Hellscream, Fenix, Ulthor Lightbringer, Tassadar.
Greatest Heros Ever.
it's excellent. indeed, it needs more. kindof leaves you hanging there. which sucks because it's really good now write some more pls >:l +crackwhip+ |
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Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.
Seems like it has potential to become a story, and could be rather interesting, depending on how you make it. So far it seems like some vampire guy had a wife, or girlfriend, or just someone he loved, who died, because they were human. |
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COME ON PEOPLE CAN'T YOU RECONIZE PURE GENIOUS WRITING WHEN YOU SEE IT WHERE'S THE COMMENTS/CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM/LOVE ETC. D: |
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Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.
it's good and has alot of potential. Don't make the same mistake as everyone else by losing interest in it though... Alot of people get bored with their passions and start over and over again until they realize they are just getting no where and give up. If you are into creative writing, it would be great to discuss stuff on the subject with you. |
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Existance has no beggining nor end, but will always have purpose.
nice yeah you should continue it. |
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Well it has the paperdoll seal of approval so its like platinum. Thats some great writing man, you should check out squalls role play site we could really use you there. Pm him about it, this is some great writing. |
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I wuv-Scwigglie
Makes me think of how I posted about my story, and no one ever said anything about it. |
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